All Comments on 'Mistress & Pet: After School'

Very nice & well written. Please do continue to write a 2nd part.

to hopefully more chapters! thanx xxx

Now this is a GOOD story!

This story is extremely short at under 2000 words and takes about 10 minutes to read, if that. There are obvious limitations to making it so short with regard to character development, building sexual tension etc etc. Let me add that you have done well considering those limitations.

"Cumm" and "cumms" annoyed me. It's "cum". Otherwise good. Try something a bit longer next time and get into it boots and all.

Very nice job nicenez! I look forward to reading more from you in the future.

this is by far the greatest mistress x pet series ive ever read, i only wish they where Furies ^_^ i love my little collar.