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TheKinkyIndianGuyTheKinkyIndianGuyalmost 11 years agoAuthor
Would appreciate your feedback

Since this is my first post and I am already toying with the idea of writing a sequel :)so I would really appreciate some feedback.

Thx,

Raj

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

Good story- generally well written too.. Perhaps you could make more of the race play?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Pretty fucking weird...

...sloppy English as well. You have to get someone to read, then edit.

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Love reading and writing erotica. Grew up in India, currently live in California. My stories are my dark fantasies, laced with kink, BDSM, and fetishes.