All Comments on 'Mistress Cindy'

3 but would've been higher up to the forced bi parts. While I appreciate the time you put into writing, I find your work to be overly extreme. In my opinion, if you backed off the gay and permanent bodily harm (ie cigarette burns) and added a bit of loving femdom, your stories would be much more popular. Chastity and femdom have been my favorite fetish for years. But honestly I usually stop reading your work part way through when it get so unrealistic and extreme. Just my 2 cents..

Good story, but you kind of rushed through things towards the end though. Don't be afraid to drag it out another page or two.

It's true--I have been criticized for being excessive before. it's just my fantasy...some people have told me that they actually re-write my story so they can enjoy it. But, I'm a sick puppy. Just the way it is. I do appreciate people who give me thoughtful criticism, and I hope people continue to read my stories. Other writers who are into chastity and are perhaps less violent are tomtame (he has a REAL gift) bakeboss, Matt Moreau, Malibuman (also known as Robert Anthony) Silkstockingslover, "teased and denied" "Anal Slave" and some others. I am a little rare in my um, passions.