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by imojen666

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
tenses

Not bad, but you changed tenses a few times.

Celeste999Celeste999over 16 years ago

Imojen....

Please continue this story. I do hope you have some nagging continuance lurking in the back of your delightful brain. Sublime!

Celly

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
very well done. HOT!.

Please continue to submit. Your descriptoins are vivid and your premise was great.

Anonymous
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