All Comments on 'Mistress Kerry Ramping-Saad'

I read the bdsm stories you write and occasionally a ts. But I don’t go looking for them because you’re so disappointing. Take this one for example. All of 30 minutes to write and all of 3 minutes to read. All your stories are like teaser trailers for a longer story.

Again take this one. Starts of very well building up a mental picture of what she looks like and her personality. Halfway down you introduce Remy Pierre and then suddenly the story’s over and the reader is left wondering why did they bother to click on the title in the first place. It has the makings of a good ten pager or a serial but it’s as if you can’t be bothered. Have you ever thought about why your story ratings are so low? You have a prodigious output of stories that leave readers dissatisfied and it makes one wonder why you continue.

Who actually bothers to scroll through your stories? I suspect no one. I think the reader picks one at random. Why don’t you start writing longer stories, of the same type, under a different name? I bet you’d get more reader satisfaction and consequently higher ratings.

It was a bit abrupt. But your writing style is good and expansive. Although I can't see how this story can develop further without becoming repetitive.

Robertodavo.