All Comments on 'Mistress of the Air Ch. 25'

The premis,characters and the writing are very good. Why are we being drip fed, basicaly one paragraph at a time? Please put 3 or 4 pages together and provide a more fulsome experience.

I'm offering up the story to Literotica readers a chapter a day from it's published version. In the context of the original book it works because each episode is designed to be fast moving and you can read on as much as you want, maybe less so for Literotica format. You could always save up chapters... or buy the whole book of course! Lady Sally still has some more adventures... there's another 15 chapters to go from here!

First of all, brass is made in a furnace by combining copper and zinc, not dug out of a mine (although zinc and copper do sometimes appear together in the same deposit, so the output of the smelter could be brass by coincidence, and Lady Sally might not be aware of the difference)...but second, a thousand cubic feet of hydrogen? That would only be a cube 10 feet on a side, unable to lift 30 pounds, much less 30 tons, and the Domme is supposedly over a hundred feet in diameter and hundreds of feet long, so try 4 or 5 MILLION cubic feet (think Hindenburg: 800 feet long and 125 feet across, holding a full 5 million cubic feet). Other than that I'm enjoying the Steampunk yarn immensely

Ok, I may have got my cubic capacities wrong! But, you realise the brass mine is a joke? It's a thread that runs through the book. Every time the Captain tries to interject to say brass is an alloy, he's interrupted. And then when Lady Sally's bronze statue is being delivered and he asks if she also has a bronze mine... LS berates him for being so stupid as to not know it's an alloy. One of my promotional blogs used a spoof annual report for the Rudston-Chichester Incorporated Brass Mining (Zanzibar) Company!