All Comments on 'Mistress Viagra Pt. 01'

It's just so overwrought and overdone I just had to laugh at how bad it was. Did you even bother to proof read this drivel? I mean really. Even for fiction this was just a horrible, silly story.

I loved the idea of it, the kidnapping, the forced intoxication, the mental aspects, the sex. But with time you should develop the characters more, and try to be more selective on just how much to include in a first chapter. The doll thing was a little over the top, but maybe that was the part you loved most. To each his own.

Next time get a proof reader and use spell check.