All Comments on 'Misty Dawn & The Raven Ch. 9'

by Swashbuckler

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
accents

I'm loving re-reading these stories, really well written, but the accent of the new captain is just way too broad to follow and doesn't seem to relate to any real ones.

Just a slight complaint, otherwise really well written and a good mixture of story and sexual tension!

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