All Comments on 'Mitch: Perdition'

This was an extremely well written tale. Surely there is more? You convey the confusion and the angst that teenagers and young adults experience so much better than most. Thank you.

So far this is absolutely brilliant. Keep going, you could be the next big author from what you've started here.

Your story had me engrossed from the very start and left me wanting more. Please don't leave us hanging. It was so very well done on so many levels.

Thank you.

nice but it was quite sad that she wasn't his first, maybe he thought wrong huh? :D

at the begining you hint that he did something embarassing and that the family kept reminding him of it yet by the end of the story nothing has happened did you forget to tell us what happened or are you getting senile

I really like your style of writing. Casual and honest with a slow build up of tension. It's the sort of story that you can put yourself right into and feel how it must be to be them. Looking forward to reading on. Keep it up