All Comments on 'Mixed Emotions Ch. 02'

by Scorpius1945

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Rad'lRad'lover 10 years ago
Interesting story - - -

The only negative is the slightly stilted conversations; not fluid enough.

tkh3nkey2110tkh3nkey2110about 3 years ago

Greg has taken the couples only day into a whole new realm. Is this game becoming dangerous? Where did they learn these techniques? Now they are talking about including their daughter? I thought this was about renewing their passion. I'm not so sure what to think about this chapter. It is a little contradictory to what they initially set out to do. Still a fun read.

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