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All Comments on 'Mixing Business with Pleasure Pt. 01'

by AugustRose

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Great Start

Great start, maybe a little rushed... but good story..

Are you going to continue with another chapter..?

TheWandTheWandover 6 years ago
A good read

I think you're on your way. Will look forward to more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Mr.. (dot-dot) Westbrook?

This "effort" needs some serious spelling, grammar and punctuation attention!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Cute, but...

...serious grammar edit needed!

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