All Comments on 'Moans Veneris Ch. 02'

As a story of teen stupidity, this is very good - as an enjoyable story, it stinks. I never thought I'd say that about something from CarlusMagnus, but I have to be honest, and I didn't enjoy this chapter at all. Gave it 3* for the writing quality, minus the disagreeable nature.

Good writing, but the characters are pretty unlike-able at the moment. Very much like typical teens. Seemed a bit short too...

Love the banter between these two, but Im sure it will eventually change as they build a relationship with each other. Loved how he came inside her... made me so wet ;). look forward to pt 3!

That was well done!

Quick dramatic exchange and wicked hot sex. You have this story well palnned, and it is working.

You changed some of the detales but I know this is lifted from the kathrine and anthony videos on xvideo

'Well guess what, little brother,' she spat out 'little brother' with venom in her voice, 'I most certainly will tell our parents that you got me pregnant, that you pinned me down on this very sofa and had your way with me and got me pregnant! ...and all your goodie goodie talk will come to shit when they do a blood test on the baby and realize that I was telling the truth and you were lying. Think about THAT while you hope and pray that I don't get pregnant. God, what a pathetic, cruel, miserable excuse of a human being you've turned into, it's probably best that you've never dated, at least there won't be any other girls turning up pregnant with you blatantly telling them it's their problem and just walking off. ...and to think I was trying to be nice to you and end all this fighting. What a joke.'

Well, I continued reading this in hopes that Jenny and Jerry would find love for each other. So far I'm still being let down and disappointed. 😞 But just like watching a train wreck, sometimes you can't turn away. So I'll follow along at least for one more installment. But this one still rates 1/5.