All Comments on 'Moans Veneris Ch. 04'

Fucking, and (especially) cumming is the ultimate sleeping pill, and I'm sure Jen and Jer are going to frequently find them selves awake and wanting their "pill" after this. So what if she wasn't as safe as she said? Maybe she thought ahead and got herself on that other pill - maybe she didn't. 'Guess we'll find out in Ch. 5. I'm happy the two sibs solved their problems and came together again. It's no fun reading about fighting.

they are inseparable now , nothing will tare them apart. they act like they are as one . I think my words covers it ( heart and soul to no end) :)

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Carlus, I have been reading and loving this series. I hope you keep writing these wonderful series.

I am absolutely loving this series CarlsMagnus!!!

Good job

Thank you for your so enjoyable story. Love it.

Getting better, but they're still not making love yet. Plus the whole thing where Jennifer masturbates more often after sex with Jeremy is an obvious giveaway that at the bare minimum she's obsessed with him. 4/5

Ok, this chapter redeemed some of the brutal behavior of the earlier two chapters. Much better and heading in the right direction.