All Comments on 'Mockingbird Ch. 01'

I think what makes this story even hotter is the risk of Belle being caught. I can't wait to read more!

It's a disgusting story. But that's what makes it so great. And what makes it even better...is you found a way to make it romantic. It's...crazy, really. Maybe I'm just that exhausted right now, but I've got to say I found this touching. Surprised there aren't more chapters, hope you get around to continuing it.

...too fast from first kiss to 'tossing His Salad', and then the 'Golden Shower', I think. However, I also think it really depends on whether on not she had already been taught or 'trained' in those kinks by her daddy, so that it was no big deal to do them to someone she really had feelings for.

I think a little more background on her and her daddy sex life would have made this VERY HOTT (and good) story more easily to actually believe.

love,

sub/slut, Hotwife,

catt