All Comments on 'Model Slave Ch. 05'

I've greatly enjoyed your story over the last couple days. I love your passionate writing and am so happy you decided to continue with this story. Love the direction you went and can't wait for more.

While BDSM may be the correct categorization in previous chapters of this superb story, in Chapter Five the romantic element really comes to the fore. As the plot develops, so does the romantic element, invoking in the reader great feelings of tenderness and compassion for the beleaguered heroine. Magnificent storytelling. Five stars

Anyone who thinks that the romantic and the descriptive erotic are incompatible has never read Oupa99's stories, where the opposite is proven, and this chapter is just one proof of that. A marvelous continuation of the story, this chapter is truly engaging from start to finish. This series had great drama, great characters, magnificent love scenes, and the romantic element adds true depth. Five stars.