All Comments on 'Modern Fairy Tales Ch. 03'

by Emerald_Dragon

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rachlourachlouabout 16 years ago
Wonderful

This is one of my favourite fairy tales and I probably would have chosen it if you hadn't got there first! Lovely story for the chain - well done. :)

DaniellekittenDaniellekittenabout 16 years ago
Very well done

but who was the one that broke into his house and knocked Rose out?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
AWESOME!

What a great, well written take on one of my favorite fairy tales! You forgot to tie the break in back to the story though. But I can forgive a little thing like that since the rest of the story was so good!

cinnamon_kisses12cinnamon_kisses12about 16 years ago
yes

I'm so in love with these chain stories! And this was very good!

PrincessErinPrincessErinabout 16 years ago
Loved it

I really love the romantic, sappy stories so this was wonderful.

Selena_KittSelena_Kittabout 16 years ago
Great job!

Fantastic addition to the chain - love this fairy tale :)

Emerald_DragonEmerald_Dragonabout 16 years agoAuthor
Sorry

Jerry was behind the break in. He was looking for evidence that Daniel was sleeping with Snow. Sorry about that!!

dragontattodragontattoalmost 16 years ago
Touching

It's hard to believe in this day and age that there are still women that save themselves for the "one" but I am sure there are still a few of them. As for myself, I am glad to say that I found my "one" and 3kids and almost fourteen years later we are still together.

I loved the story and it reminded me so much of my own relationship with my sister. Wonderful job.

PurpleTiaraPurpleTiaraabout 15 years ago
I thought the developer was the breaker inner!

Very good tale, kind of sweet and romantic as well as hot

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