by Emerald_Dragon
This is one of my favourite fairy tales and I probably would have chosen it if you hadn't got there first! Lovely story for the chain - well done. :)
but who was the one that broke into his house and knocked Rose out?
What a great, well written take on one of my favorite fairy tales! You forgot to tie the break in back to the story though. But I can forgive a little thing like that since the rest of the story was so good!
I'm so in love with these chain stories! And this was very good!
I really love the romantic, sappy stories so this was wonderful.
Jerry was behind the break in. He was looking for evidence that Daniel was sleeping with Snow. Sorry about that!!
It's hard to believe in this day and age that there are still women that save themselves for the "one" but I am sure there are still a few of them. As for myself, I am glad to say that I found my "one" and 3kids and almost fourteen years later we are still together.
I loved the story and it reminded me so much of my own relationship with my sister. Wonderful job.
Very good tale, kind of sweet and romantic as well as hot