All Comments on 'Modified Ch. 04'

As I noted at the start of the story, I got some editing feedback which I took a little time to work on, plus real life kept me occupied. I’ve notied a couple of typos, but at this point don’t want to delay this any further!

All feedback and suggestions are welcome.

Omg another fabulous chapter,it is great that like me you give lots and lots of consideration to the women. I do the same, Iam a greedyfucker but I always make sure that the women that I am with get all the respect and pleasure that they deserve, whether I am having a one on one or two on one or more. I absolutely adore cunt,but always respect the woman/women that I am with. Cunt lapping sex maniac Lanc’s UK.

This is a really fun set of chapters, I hope it’s completed