All Comments on 'Molly's Adventures Pt. 01'

by DsHusband

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
been there done that

Love my wife's stories enough said...

HarddaysknightHarddaysknightover 9 years ago
Tense? Punctuation?

Dialogue works best with quotation marks, not colons.

impo_58impo_58over 9 years ago
a 3 * to see what happen...

I'll comment and rate in the end. Let's see what happen and how it happen.

OOAAOOAAover 9 years ago
Excellent story!!!!!!!!!!!

Congrats!!!

Continue soon please ;)

DreamUpDreamUpover 9 years ago
Good Start

This was a good start to what could be a hot series. Looking forward to the next installment.

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