All Comments on 'Mom and I'

Jumping from one thing to another it fails to hold the attention

Please continue with next chapter and a next.

Very hot

Loved the story

That was hot as hell, made me think of my own mother who I saw many times naked. She would walk from the bath to her room down the hall naked. Never tring to cover her self. I would later lay in my bed jacking off thinking of what it would be like to slip my cock into her. Or to have her walk in and catch me and stroke or suck my cock while she was still naked. I would play with her large tits and pinch those big nipples of hers. I always loved her big tits, and still do.

In the future skip and/or stop using any form of "......" as it wrecks the story line and makes for confusion. For a pause the proper method is use of a coma or for a switch in thought either end the sentence or use a semi-colon.

I hope that Leo gets his big fat cock up his sister's adorable little coochie, now that he's shoved it up his mother's warm wet cunt. That boy's got enough creamy sperm in his young balls for both the family twats.

I hope his mom tells her friend all about it. Would like to read about a 3some with his mom's freind joining in and also 3some with mom, son and sis.

It felt sort of stiff and restrained. So Mom and her friend didn't look alike but were both hot? Wow...that's so odd.

A lot of good ideas but not put together as well as it could be. should stick to one subject and fully develop it.

Its alright,you have a lot of cliches in there... Like "Oh Leo, if only you were here" There has to have been a better way youcould have started this story other than his mother walking in on him in the bathroom... Come on, what did she expect to see

These stories where the moms are only 15 or 16 years older than their sons are a turnoff. I like a good 30 years between mom and son.

Good ideas n thoughts could had been slightly* more creative but it was good regardless i had "fun" reading it i hope theres a part too that involves mom son n friend mom son n sist or even better a foursome with all of them together

Very hot... love how you descirbe the need she has for her son. Reminds me of my first time with my son and how he ended up with a little sister... Oops! ;)

Everybody's a critic. Your off to a good start, keep the story going and reread before you post. I'm looking forward to your next chapter. Keep up the good work.

No Stars.

Oh God.

Absolute Crap.

Leave.

I liked it-good hot sex, some build-up, nice people well-written thanks

Why did you stop writing?

Really wish you would continue this story

couple of whores...1 star

As an avid reader of mother/son incestuous love stories, I find your story to be thoroughly enjoyable. I especially liked the fact that the mother saw her son as a man instead as her baby/son. I liked the fact that there was no guilt, shame nor psychological power play between mother and son. Both realized no one would love them as unconditionally as each other. I hope the author returns to writing.