All Comments on 'Mom and I Ch. 01'

Fast and furious is okay, this started hot... But then you lost me when he started calling her his slut and whore... The first time, in the first chapter; was that your intent? Since its chapter 01, it could have been saved for later...

Thank you!

The three smucks who commented before me. This is another of your very good stories. When I see your name it's a must read. Never disappointed.

Asr3, are you really that shallow? Those comments weren't bad. That's what this section is for.... criticism, good or bad.

Are you one of those people on here that can't handle any kind of criticism? It's strange, because you didn't write this story and you got offended like a snowflake about something not even directed towards you.

I really enjoyed this. I'm writing a father-daughter story, and this one gave me some inspiration as to how you presented the details and lead in to the sex act.

God get a life,,,This is a great story and morons like you come here and read every word then cry about a mispelled word..Write a story for us if you can do better??

Very loving and caring, just wonderful. Looking to read. How mom will dress and act on thire first date

If he was able to lick her g-spot, dude has to be Gene Simmons.

Alex sounds like one sexy young man. Give him some chest hair, just enough across the secs and in the sternum that mom can stroke and taste. Sometimes a man's chest is very sensitive like a woman's and tasting and stroking the chest hair can be a very exciting moment for the young man. Alex seems that he might enjoy his mother's attention to the pecs and chest and abs and thighs and forearms and ...

Yes, so HOT and descriptive ....so many possibilities like his Mom is

wearing just a sexy lace panty and a t-shirt top just barely holding her big boobs. Alex comes home and screws her right there and pulls out to come all over her butt, back and into her hair. That's to show Mom how much cum he has for her and that playful sex encounters is part of the plan too. Yes another chapter, please. Thank you.

Really good erotica. One caveat: "in the throws of passion"- the word is "throes"

Please keep writing!

excellent writing, I am able to read through the slight errors without any trouble at all. Are you planning on continuing this relationship? Like how will they be together while he goes to college? Maybe she will move with him, if she wants him that often she will need to be near him all the time. I do hope they end up as a loving couple.

Great story, finished reading it and just had to send a nice load out thinking about your story ! loved it.

Like my whore mother

Yes, very good story although I wish it had mom swallowing more incestuous cum...that's just my own preferences , I suppose. Keep writing! Just learn a little female anatomy. A woman's g spot isn't reachable by a tongue. A finger or two, yes.....but not a tongue

For the read.

I have recently reread the story and didn't like that way it went so I decided to rewrite it. I see that a lot of you enjoyed the story as is, so I wanted to give you the option of saving the story somewhere else if you wanted to reread it in the future. or you can contact me and I will send you a copy of the original story. up to you.

p.s. rewrite is finished and submitted along with chapter 2. hope you all enjoy.

hasnoalias

ALEX !!!!! KEEP HER AS HAPPY AS YOU CAN , FOR EVER AND A DAY, NEVER LET HER GO. This was a very good read THANKS ps. another chapter would be nice.

It was kind of boring. There was no real plot other than them fucking. Which you knew was going to happen

That's what your mom's name should be. You used the word moan or moaning continuously. Try a few new verbs. Other than that, mom sound hot.

Down and dirty, with no gushy stuff about being guilty by either of them. I hope that was your intention. She wanted him to fuck her silly, dominate her, so after she came he should have dominated her as she wanted and throat fucked her until he shot directly into her stomach.

There is nothing like some good mom loving. Thanks for your time and imagination.

You know there must be another or three! A sister comes home from college, mom's sister comes to visit, a clerk at the grocery store, you pussyfooting is everywhere, and you are strong at description, so, make it happen!

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Awesome fantastic sure wish my mom & I had a closer relationship. Is this a true story? Sounds like it could be.

I thoroughly enjoy well written mother/son incest stories. The characters were well developed. The plot was straight forward and believable. The passion, intimacy, and sensual feelings expressed for each other felt real and actual. I wish I could have a relationship half as caring as this one. I honestly hope this story is an actual reflection of a real couple(s). 5 star rating. Am anxious to read the next chapter. To the author: Well done.

Wow, he's a pretty skilled lover for a senior in high school, lol

Wow that was good! The passion really comes through. Well done, nice writing. I hope there will be many more in this series 👍

1 star.Same story as massage with my mother.Try a different storyline.

That was a very sweet, romantic and loving story, not to mention erotic as hell. Looking forward to reading your other stories!

Hot stuff, but it could do with a bit less over-the-top dialogue and sex, and a bit more plot, just to add some actual story. Just a thought.