All Comments on 'Mom and I Ch. 02'

Another good one honey, thank you.

descriptions please. Lovely story!

At least Mr. MaternalyObsessed does not

hide behind anonymous but I would give

him a lot more credit if he wrote a story.

Maybe I could learn some good grammar

or a new style of writting.

I will be the first to admit my grammar needs

work and I am working on it. BUT I am getting

positive feedback on stories.

It is much easier to trash stories written by

others, than to write your own story.

I don't expect everyone to like my stories but

enough do, and that inspires me to try and

write a better story