by Ian56
Oh My Fuckin' Word! Simply amazing, I loved it. Humorous and erotic at the same time. Going to have to go back and read the preceding chapters now.
And great build up. The first couple of stories were really funny, too, along with the steady build to the climax in this episode. Looking forward to part 5.
One nitpick if I may: please review the correct usage of an apostrophe. You don't use it for a plural. Otherwise, well written.
In the first three parts the story was going along nice and slow and BOOM they have sex in chapter 4. It came out of nowhere. Before this his mom giving him a BJ was a huge deal and nothing followed. Then the doctor says he have to have sex and that's it.
It feels rushed.