All Comments on 'Mom and the Bad Blind Date'

Life sometimes goes quickly as does the sex, but dude this was hyper speed, like you wanted to jerk off at supersonic speed. Spoilt what could have been an interesting and erotic story.

This could have -- and should have -- been stretched out into a MUCH longer story. It would have made it more realistic and more enjoyable. I'd like to see you take this story and rework it completely. Stretch it out to at least 4 pages, and don't get to the sex until at least page 3.

Way too fast paced! Was starting to get really interested, and then it was over :/

Thanks for the comments that you liked the story. It was shorter than I thought when I read the finished version, too.

Excellent story, good writing, but this one should have more chapters to explore mom and daughter to the fullest.

i love mother/daughter stories like this. nothing but love for each

other, no drama, no b.s., no cheating, all of that stuff, just beautiful

love and sex.