All Comments on 'Mom at the Prom'

A 5 litre bottle of Jack Daniels? I think not, even using literary license!

Good stuff. Also looking forward to the continuation of Uptown Spunk with a hopefully mother-daughter-son threesome

I love the sex. The dream like commentary in the middle was a little confusing and the 5 lifer bottle of JD was just ridiculous. Overall, though, very hot.

I haven't read anything this long since Grad School but Holy Shit that was a remarkably hot story.

I hope you do at least one more chapter of this. Show the respective exes a bit more of the revenge that they brought on themselves.

Thanks, everyone, here and on email!

Hopefully they become a couple, and don't need a third person. Too bad she can't get pregnant. That would be hot.

For writing

Well writer then and amazing!

Any chance you have a second chapter in the works?

Been wondering where you were. Great writing,great buildup, and as usual,great detail. Would love a sequel, detailing some hot mother/son trysts while Dad's around. Does Mom have a hot sister or perhaps a hot granny that could make it a hot threesome? Or another mom/son team from school or church that could possibly get together for a hot foursome. Plenty of potential. Thanks again for the hot read!

...and then some!!!!!!!

Hot and yummy! I hope you're planning to add to this story! Thank you!

Loved the story. Would love it to be continued.

More please. Fantastic!

It is time for Eddie to roll her over and claim all of her including her sexy tight ass.

More please

I have a brother and sister couple and a mother and son couple who are long time home improvement customers. They live together as husband and wife. They know that I know and have kept their secret so they only call me when they need any improvements or repair work done. I'm jealous as hell of the brother. His sister is beautiful and has a spectacular body... but they're both quiet, low key and exceptionally nice people. He's a very good looking guy... and, while working at their house, I've seen him wearing things that unintentionally showed that he's hung like a horse. His sister must have experienced it early, laid claim to it and has squatters' rights to his thick foot long cock. Before she passed, I was fucking an older woman who knew them and their family. She told me that they'd been living together for fifteen years, since they moved out their parents house when she graduated from high school. He must have had a vasectomy to prevent getting her pregnant. Even when his sister is dressed down, she's stunning. He knows it, too. That's why he had me install an excellent (secondary) security system on their house. I think that something might have happened that caused him to ask me to find a really good one and install it because I didn't see much of his sister while I was working there, that time. A short time later, not too far from where they live, a young new mother got home from grocery shopping, opened the overhead door with the remote control and two black punks who had been stalking her ducked into the garage before she closed the door and stayed behind her SUV until the door closed and she got out of her vehicle.. She was repeatedly raped by the two assholes who fucked the shit out of her, beat her senseless, put her in the hospital and fucked up her married/family life. Leave it to a couple of dumb niggers... they just HAD to brag about fucking the white bitch with their big black cocks and filling her cunt, mouth and ass with Afro-sperm. They each got multiple charges, convictions and sentences to serve sixty five years in State Prison. They should have been tied and then slowly fed, feet first, into a commercial bone chipper.

AND THE STORY??? FIVE STARS.

A well written story, must have more

This was a great, well written, sexy, hot and exciting story. I would love to see this continue. Calling him baby and herself mommy while he fucked his "parent" would have been enough to blow me away. The story was inspirational what a great idea. No one knew her it worked out great. Would love to find out what his X thought.

Thanks everyone!!

Great story! One of the best!

This was amazing, thank you for making such a wonderful peace of art.

A truly entertaining tale.

and an author who's clearly having a great time throwing around phrases like "sinful, succulent masterpiece of forbidden fruit," "maternal sugar walls," and "each howitzer--like motion of his big, spewing penis brought her that much closer to her own feral crescendo." Thanks for the story.

This is by far one of the best stories i have ever read. You are the best 🔥

Thank you.

5 liter bottle of Jack? Really? I

At least it is once Mommy arrives...

I had to take a few breaks to "take care of business"

The only thing wrong with the story are the mistakes, mostly in grammar but some in misspelled words or missing letters in words. You need an Editor.

So freaking HOT had me hard every time I picked it up to read it. Very well done.

how old is the mother in the story?Why did not she get pregnant?it was not written :( would have been a good story if you are pregnant and a baby is born, they move and get married

This take on the Mom as Substitute Date story premise is certainly done with an unapologetic two-fisted approach but I'm struggling with the excesses during their sex acts. It reads like you bet yourself on how many flowery figures of speech you could squeeze into a single story.

All the conflicting imagery from Grecian / Roman deities to medical terminology laced through with hyperbole is, well, too much. Sometimes you need to use just plain words and keep the thesaurus aside for a bit of a change here and there. Don't beat us over the head with all the Olympian nicknames and medical jargon when "his tongue" and "her pussy" would suit just nicely.

It's all become too comical and I'm kinda just skimming through the actual sex now just to see how it turns out. I think you can actually write and just let the editing get out of hand on this one. I didn't mind that they got into the sex fairly quickly. Just ease back on the excess and exaggeration. Five liters of JD would kill an adult I believe. Saying two would have believable and nobody would mention it.

Mom loves her son, Son loves his mom. Now read it to belive it.It's a Long read but you will like it. THANK YOU...THANK YOU

To bad she couldn't get pregnant.fucked my mothers hairy cunt full night then couples days later my mom told me I got her pregnant then told her your moving in with me then told her plan on giving kid in you each year and we end up with 5 kids she had her last one at age 45.then told my mom I got your sister my aunt knocked up my mom told me is moving in with us yes she said good your aunt and I use to go down on each other but now you got your aunt pregnant that's better starting your own family having your mother and aunt as your sperm banks and two older sluts and milfs

Great story, well written and animated!!

A whore story. Mommy made Barbara look like a saint.

One of the best mom goes to prom stories. The sex science at the prom was seriously intense, great writing.

Good story! Would've liked an epilogue to see how things ended up for them. Ending was cut too short.

Weak!!

Damn that was hot

Awesome—looking forward to next

That killed the story for me 3 stars

OMG! What a great story. The only other thing that I wished, would have happened is for his classmates had taken their turns dancing with her, grinding their cocks against her and feeling her up.

As good as it gets

Very colourful description, thanks for the hot story! Just one question. I was somewhat distracted when I started reading it, perhaps I've missed something to understand why the son would live with his father. The first Clinton term was mentioned, so we are in the 1990ies, and dad was the wrongdoer in that marriage... Not that it's awfully important. I'm off to read some more of Ernest H's short stories!

chapter 2 : with modern medicine, son impregnates his mother 6 times.

Loved the story you did a good job in building it up but after the prom when they were having sex she said it was the first she's had in months what about the sex in the kitchen and I think you should have continued with more to see where there sex went to. Why was he living with his father? Was she a bad mother? Still gave it 5 stars!!!!!!!!!!

It had the bones of a good storey, then in chapter 4 you destroyed it with your sexual descriptions I.e., “her candied, scrumptious cunt” and so many other ridiculous quotes. Suggest you read SexyBeast’s storey “Stepmom Goes To The Prom”. I couldn’t read past chapter 4. ⭐️