All Comments on 'Mom Can't Hold It'

Very hot & well written and you hit two fetishes in one go! More please!

Maybe in another story son could spank mom as she lets loose and wets in his lap.

I'll admit it, watersports is at the very bottom of my fetish list. I only started with this because it concerned mom-son incest, and I'm VERY glad that I read it. This was very, very well written, and the son's yearning for his mother and her eventual reciprocation made for a very enjoyable tale. After a point, I even started enjoying reading about the fetish. A great tale Phobetor, 5 stars and a fave from me.

Great story, i hope you write few more parts to it.

spank mom... and when they get to their destination..... maybe the mother's sister is also a freak....:PPPP

There are lots of different ways you could take this story.

I am not a fan of water sports, but your story is the exception. I agree with your fans, this story should continue

Turns out mom has other needs or ideas, and her sis is wired the same way.

Thanks Don.

Blech. Yuck. Disgusting.

Barley is a wonderfully versatile cereal grain with a rich nutlike flavor and an appealing chewy, pasta-like consistency.

Spell check won't help crap like this - get an editor ***

Wow again!

The story was good but it was poorly edited. Find an editor who knows how to use pronouns like she and her instead of the title. "mom this. Mom that'

It might be in Incest because the two parties are related, but the behaviour and actions are FETISH. A mother pissing on her son is the classic definition of FETISH.

Just because the site doesn't place the Tags at the front of the story doesn't mean the author can't. If you have any consideration for the reader take a few words and tell us in advance that what follows contains fetishes and if this is not your cup of pee move on.

Please!

For the record, It is NOT OK to urinate in a public Hot Tub.

great story. very realistic. I loved the long, slow build up. well written and hot!

Mom Can't Hold It

Mom, Son & Watersports fun

How much more of an 'advisement ' do you need?

"rightbank" obviously has attention deficient syndrome, or he would have been able to grasp the clearly defined Title as well as the promo line for the story.

Please pay no attention to this fool.

I loved this story because it accurately describes the passion and obsession of a watersports lover.

the story seemed very realistic and the banter between son and mom was well written.

looking forward to chapt 2

Loved this story and hope a part 2 is in the works.

Please a another installment or maybe even several....5 Stars....

Please write more on this amazing subject

A good and hot story. Please keep the story going

A true classic mom son love-lust story! More from you and your editor!

So wrong so right the beginning alone was five star worthy

Delightfully and deliciously sexy! Dying to find out what's next in their lovely and tasty adventures... My mouth is already watering, thank you!

I too hope there will be a sequel to this beautifully sexy story.

This is a great story and needs more chapters

More of this please

I love your stories.. But he didnt suck her pussy and didnt drink piss from it.. It should be more hot if she drink his piss.. Next time add a wine glass or bottle and let them drink frm it...

When she took him to the toilet I lost it,I could see hear and taste her piss. Came with out touching myself. Boom.

That's fucking hot

this is one of the best piss stories on literotica...

well done for writing it...enjoyed wanking to it...more please...

Good story but needs better editing. A smell is a scent, not a sent. Sadly there are still quite a few other errors as well.

The conversations were incredibly cheesy. Not that I expect realism in my porn, but the way these characters shared, "normal," interactions were far too lame even for me. I.e: the entire introduction.

more please needs more chapters

This is a great tale, albeit with the previously noted grammar and syntax issues. Despite that, it's a great read,erotic, sensual and very believable. It's actually. Not dissimilar to my own scenario, although I could never get quite get mum to enjoy pee play as much as I did !

That story made me cum so hard I shot myself in the eye with one stream and the next flew right past my head! Awesome story!

While pissing in the spa is bad, what do you think about pissing on the Hotel carpet!

Too me, one is tame as compared to the other.

Glad to see he was fucking his mom. Hope she not on birth control be nice to see her pregnant. Iknow got my mom and pregnant at the sametime. We went on vacation together slept in same room. Once I came back to the room both of them doing 69 so I got on top of my aunt rammed her cunt and shot cum in her cunt then did same thing to my mom now that's all do the 3 of us having three way sex

Ka minule on ema peale kusnud ja väga soe tunne oli kohe.

Loved your story. My Mom called me into the bathroom once and I watched, as she pissed in the toilet. I clearly remember the sight and smell. I focused on her pussy and the stream coming out. The scent made me rock hard. Prior to this Mom had been teasing me sexually. I jerked off that night, while wearing her panties over my face. I must have shot a gallon! More!!!

Conngrats on a really exciting piece. I never could convince my mother to try any watersports fun, but have enjoyed with it several other lovers over my life. The idea of mum spraying me as we fucked is almost too exciting to think about !

thank you, for that amazing story! it was interesting to read, from start to end.

Great story. You got the pace spot on and ratcheted up the sexual tension very well.

Fantastic, fucking hottttt!

That truly was one of the best stories ever to have been written. The storyline, the tension, the excitement, it was all there. Delightful, sheer perfection and beautifully written. Highly erortic and sexually charged. I hope there is another chapter to follow on from this.

Very hot story. We share similar tastes. Please read mine and give me some feedback.

The front of my panties are a complete mess after reading this story! A very hot and arousing story that earned a 5+. The start was kind of slow but it worked for the build up. What can I say, the ending was fantastic, had me hard and leaking "like a waterfall".

great story wanted son to SPAK her

It's really very seductive story. It make me hard and horny . I run my dick while reading and cum in last. Love to drink women pee. I never taste before. But now I want to taste and drink yellow shower 🚿 😘😘

Great story, my friend. He was selfish, though, after she gave in to him and let him watch her pee in the toioet, would have been better seduction of her to tend to her fantasy of spanking as well! A dude watching his hot mother pee and then beating her ass silly while she rubbed one out? Oh yes a superstory lol. This one was one of my favs on the site, I enjoy and thank you.

Incredibly hot and horny story, one of the very best .

Incredible story'

I love mom / son piss stories!

A masterpiece

If not for the over-focus on piss - this would have been "top shelf" for me. Good set-up, detailed descriptions of emotions and honesty. Good job, Author; just cannot envision being sexually aroused by having someone piss on me or me on them!

really a20 out of 5 but you know what I mean

Amazing ending with the mom kissing her son and them not wanting to be apart.

Fantastic story, but a bit long winded at times.

Fabulous.Well weitten.Erotic.

One if the best I ever read.

You took time to detail nicely every emotion, thoughts,and their shared passions and desires.

Quite well written (with some mistakes in spelling) and a great story. I can imagine that there should be at least a sequel or more. You do a good job in building things up.

Perfectly paced. Perfect rising action. May be the best I’ve read on here for a while. Also though, it may be because this almost exact scenario happened to me except with an older sister but now she just says “get your mouth ready “ when she has to piss. I can’t get enough of it. Get to watch her spread those pink lips and I gulp down every drop I can. Keep up the great work. I’m saving this one.

Seriously naughty, yet awesomely HOT !!👍