All Comments on 'Mom Can't Stand It'

Damn that's an enjoyable story!! Thanks for sharing.

I’ll be waiting for Part 2

I hope you are not going to stop here. This tale was just getting to the hot and sexy bits. This bloke could be in for the rides of his life if Mom & Sis want to ride him.

All mothers and sons should experience such uninhibited sex. Adding Tara was so exciting.

This is your second story? man you need to ad a part two to this asap

I probably should have stopped reading this story the moment the son made that comment about being 'into' 'Fifty Shades,' but I didn't - much to my dismay. I don't mind spanking with a bare hand, and I understand what's behind it - I've even done it, a few times, at my lady's request. But, having had a leather belt used on my bare buttocks - by my father - in my adolescent years (as punishment for some infraction or other) I can't see doing that sort of thing as a form of 'sex play.' It's far too disgusting, to me - and forced me to give this story a "1."

Every damned story has a mother in a bikini or thong..wtf.. a woman, if desired by her son or brother, etc.. need to be dressed sexily.. dresses, skirts, nylons heels.. heck I have a sec relationship with my own sister.. I'm now 27 she's 33.. not once has she ever worn a bikini or thong.. I think a woman needs to all ways have, at the very least a sexy pair of nylons on her legs... The night before her wedding I fucked my then 23 yr old sister, and I was 17.. in her hotel suite, the whole night.. in her wedding attire, and a sheer tan colored pair of pantyhose.. legs up, the whole night.. I never came so much in a woman still to this day as I did that night.. my sister ended up pregnant because of me and I said it was all about what she wore for me..

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And it’s too not to. Learn the difference.

Every fucking negative comment was from an any. which means it can be just one fucking guy bitch about his life. So unless they have a name just ignore them

Much too short and a terrible lack of any kind of character development. Why go with the mom in a bikini approach? Be creative and original in your thinking.

Needs a lot more build up and character development. I have read stories that went right to sex similar to this and did a sort of flashback to how it happened this was just rushed and either needs to be rewritten to expand it out to something with a bit more thought

Good start to a story but with the way you ended the story it was almost comedy.

...this was a hot story because Chase and Mother loved it! I'm surprised her ass didn't bleed.

You can develop characters later; I know as much about Chase and Mother as I need for now.

Personal preferences: I like flawed mothers with big round asses and copious saggy tits who just like to fuck all day and cannot get enough of the new man of the house. I don't like moving directly to a knob job; that's realistic if you're a selfish man. I'd rather Tara caught Chase with his face between Mother's legs and Mother's head rocking back, screaming for her fourth orgasm. I'd be happy if Tara was disgusted, left home, became a nun, allowing Chase to be Mother's solitary 18 year old boy toy 24/7/365.

I gave you a 4. Sexy, but Chase doesn't need to be blown.

This site limits anonymous comments to one per IP address. Yes, there are a few ways around that for the tech savvy, but beyond the abilities of most people on the net. So, technically, that is possible it's one guy, but highly, highly unlikely.

Bring on Chapter 2 and more. And piss on the Nay Sayers. They have nothing better to do than piss and moan....I liked it, is all that matters to me.. Would read more...

Give Chase a bit of chest hair for that sexy body!

Good start, Will be looking for more.

I didn't love it.

I didn't hate it.

Sometimes you don't need 50,000 words to tell a nice tale when 10,000 words will do.

Nice start and I look forward to Ch 2.

The sister part IS a great little wrinkle.

a good read but too short

Looking frwd for the next part to this series

The last sentence made it for me.

Not usually in to BDSM, but mommy making him spank her made my cock twitch. Maybe sis has been naughty too.

So, her bikini was two pieces, eh? Different to all those one and three or four piece bikinis!

You disappeared where is part 2