All Comments on 'Mom Has Needs Too'

mmm I would love another story likes this its so hot

Really nice to read a story like this, I would like to read some more to know how they progress through life as a couple. There must be challenges for them to face like family and neighbours/friends etc.

Eh. Just eh. Nothing original or spectacular about the story but decently written. ***

just like yesterday's story going fot the bang than done

who knew mom was a nasty cum slut??!!

You've used both "coming" and "cumming" in this brief story. So, which is it?

Yes, we need another chapter or two as your story has a great theme with so much potential. Now that Mom and her son have had a great first-time sexual experience; the son needs to make out with Mom and get her worked up well. Then both should go into her bedroom or kitchen where Josh bangs her hard from behind as she leans against the counter !! Thank you.

Just as an FYI, the quoted text and the narrative stating who is talking are considered part of the same sentence. Generally they are separated by a comma before the closing quotation mark. Even with exclamation and question marks, they are still considered parts of the same sentence. This also means you do not capitalize pronouns following the quoted text.

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For example.

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"I love you." He whispered, as he began to move his hips up and down.

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"I love you," he whispered as he began to move his hips up and down.

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Another one.

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"Maybe we should go home now." She whispered, kissing him once more.

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"Maybe we should go home now?" she whispered, kissing him once more.

I loved the story. Wished it was longer and that there was more dirty talk but other than that, it was hot

Short, but very good

Loved the story and wish there was more details of his mother how sweet she is. Then describe what it looks like and feels like to shoot his baby batter inside. Please continue maybe there might miss a P one month. Follow up on the story want more

Wierd and incomplete

5*****

Story was short with little build up to the action but good effort

I have an idea for one of you good writers (I cannot do it) about scientists wanting women to help with their IVF human/animal DNA experiments in a search for cures for different diseases. Any takers?

Well, it took too long to call her son "Josh" instead of "Son." Seems somewhat stern and matronly, and I don't think that's the image you're trying to create. He's there for her, she knows it, and the last four years should have been a period of generous banter that dispensed with "Son."

Too short, but a good start.

If someone wanted to take an idea and write a story, how would the let the person who suggested it know? Thanks.

More...PLEASE!

my son and I got started much in the same way, only we were both younger

Her character comes across as a frumpy old lady.

Mul oli niisugune lugu oma emaga.Nikkusime,aga mul ei tahtnud pauk lahti minna ja ema oli juba higist märg,kuid äkki võttis oma aluspüksid,ning pani mulle nina alla.Need olid ema vitu lõhnased ja mul läks kohe lahti.Sellest ajast saati ema hoiab oma jalast võetud aluspüksid padja all.Ma võiks oma esimesest kepist oma emaga palju rääkida,et olin siis 15 aastane koolipoiss ja ema 45 aastane.

Seda juttu lugedes tekkis mul ka iha ema järgi.Ema küll helistas mulle,et saabub järgmine kuu minu juurde riigi teisest otsast.Minu naine oli komandeeringusse läinud kaheks kuuks.Elasin naise vanematega ühes majas koos lastega.Ema ma pole näinud peaaegu aasta.Kui ma emal lennujaamas vastus käisin,siis ta jooksis mulle vastu ja me suudlesime autos väga kaua.Ajasime juttu ilmast maast ja suudlesime veel ning ema ütles,et väga hästi pidin suudlema.Oli juba hiline õhtu ja 230.km sõitu ja ema tahtis hommikuni hotellis ööbida.Leidsime ühe toa hotellis ja ööbisime seal.Hotelli toas me jälle suudlesime kokkusaamise rõõmust,korraga ma tõmbasin ta enda vastu ja ta käskis kõvemini hoida teda.Tellisime kaks pokaali head veini ja olime teineteise embuses.Korraga ta sosistas mulle kõrva,et kas ma tahan emaga ühes voodis magada,siis taluta mind voodisse.Võtsin ennast riidest lahti,aga ema käskis mind endal riided ära võtta kuna ta on sõidust väsinud.Aluspükste ära võtmisega ta värises üleni ning ütles,et näita mis üks mees teeb ühe üksi elava naisega.Keppisin teda öö jooksul mitu korda,korra ta kiirgus valjusti,et ma pidin ta suu käega sulgema.Niimoodi see öö möödus meil.Ema oli mul külas niikaua kui minu naine koju tuli.Selle aja jooksul käisime emaga kuus korda hotellis,iga kord kolm tundi,kuna ta ei julgenud minu juures kodus keppida.Niimoodi need meeletud armatsemised kestsid ja kestavad siia maani,ning mu naine saab ka väga hästi minu emaga läbi ja kui ma talle seda emaarmastust räägiksin siis ta kindlasti seda ei usu.

The story is also realistic, short and sweet.

Those of us who read the story know whethet he got to fuck his mom or not!

I am glad i came across this story.

Mina panin videokaamera ema tuppa kapi otsa ja proovisin ema esimest korda nikkuda.Suure riiu ja nutuga lõpuks nikkusin teda,mis jäi kõik videosse.Ükskord ma näitasin seda oma sõbrale koolis ja jutt hakkas tasapisi liikuma nii et ma pidin emaga ära sealt kolima,teise kaugemasse linna.Elame tänaseni emaga koos,pole häda midagi.Emaga on kõige,kõige parem koos elada.

Now this is not lust, he had no idea this would happen.

It just did, and if this is THE END they lived happly ever

after. And this was a very good read, well done.

...THANK YOU...

Umm..... too short. Very good story though. Thank you.

'Wildbill

Outstanding love story between mother and son. Nothing but unadulterated adoration, respect, and love between equals. The chemistry, sensitivity and sexual intimacy between the lovers is exactly how I would expect a real life coupling would mature and grow. As a romantic, I would love to see this story develop into a series.

Awesome story but a bit short next Ch please!!!!!!!!!!!

Very nice but it was too short 5stars

It was too short you needed to continue gave it 5 stars

Very nice story but it was too damn short just like alot of stories on here one sex act then done!!!! 4 stars

I Love mommy's in stockings. If you write more. Can you keep up with the stockings. Maybe add seamless pantyhose. Sadly it was a very short story. But you did have me hard during it.