All Comments on 'Mom Knocks'

It was tooooo drawn out.

I completely disagree. In every way this is...... Well Done!

Seems Realistic.

Jacking off in front of Mom. She is a total slut.

If it did you any good to get it off your chest then Great!!! As for me, it just didnt plunk my twanger. A little too "day in the life" for my taste, but I would give something else a try if you write again

I really liked it and the fact it had plenty of realism.

I hope you write more.

This was a great beginning to a sored tale. Please continue with a chapter or two....

Something with good depth and thought, liked it, great. Please write more.

On a personal note, I would have been just as happy if he had never found out which warm orifice he had entered and was left wondering knowing only that he had done so.

I'm sure there are many stories like this in the real world, since mothers tend to have much more influence over their sons than the fathers do. He's at work all day and is detached at night.

It doesn't take much for a mother to adversely affect her son's future sexual development, and it doesn't have to be nearly as overt as this story presents. All it takes is a comment at the wrong moment.

Because the maternal relationship is so primal, I don't believe that the effects are ever reversed. The best an affected son can do is learn to understand what happened and work out ways to deal with the emotional wreckage left behind.

I left no stars, but only because I'm not sure what number to assess. I'll need some time to work out this response.