All Comments on 'Mom Named Barbie Ch. 08'

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boaman007boaman007over 7 years ago
Here we go.....

Great job so far and it continues. Thanks this was one of your best chapters so far it really give insight into mom's quandary battling her dual personas. Love the subtle set up for dessert before dinner.

TSreaderTSreaderover 7 years ago
Getting better!

Almost there! Keep going! Thank you!

MajorRewriteMajorRewriteover 7 years ago
5 stars

Long slow build up is nice. Dropping her panties may be a bit abrupt.

sabra16023sabra16023over 7 years ago
Great story

Keep it going. Waiting for next chapter. Thanks 5 stars

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
More

My only criticism is the chapter was too short.

Turtle1952Turtle1952over 7 years ago
now we getting somewhere

cmon, don't keep us suspended like this

va45va45over 7 years ago
Wonderful

Another very good chapter. One could see Barbi outfit clearly and easily. Looking forward to.the next chapter. Very well painted.

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