by PegasusRyder
Love the way you are having the two of them grow together. Keep the story going.
I love the way the story keeps evolving, building anticipation to read the next chapters. Better than just constant sex scenes...
youre a very talented writer. Can't wait to see whats next. Such a sexy slutty mom.
The more I read this wildly hot story, the more I think about in the back of my head how fucked in the head poor Barbara is, and how oddly manipulative Jay is. I'm curious to see if these two will ever end up hating each other again.
The build up is very suspenseful, love the sexy tease. The outline where Jay is heading is very appealing and lustfully desireable.