All Comments on 'Mom Named Barbie Ch. 15'

by PegasusRyder

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va45va45over 7 years ago
Very good

Now we will see just how free, wild and open she can be

Looking forward to the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Bravo

I think the story is excellent so far, I don't mind the plot twists. Looking forward to the next story.

NaughtySouthernGentNaughtySouthernGentover 7 years ago
Here we go again...

Does anybody other than me find it ridiculous that the harshest critics here are either anonymous or have a profile with no details and NO STORIES OF THEIR OWN? Put up or shut up and have the balls to write your own stories and subject yourself to the same criticism you dish out...

PegasusRyderPegasusRyderover 7 years agoAuthor
Thank you

Thank you Naughtysoutherngent. Very well said.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Agreed

I agree with NaughtySouthernGent. Plus this story is good. Note it's a STORY. A narrative. Therefore the author is telling it at their own pace and with their own style. Keep it up PegasusRyder!

tedderman43tedderman43about 7 years ago
Interesting

Love the twist look forward to more

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