by PegasusRyder
Now we will see just how free, wild and open she can be
Looking forward to the next chapter.
I think the story is excellent so far, I don't mind the plot twists. Looking forward to the next story.
Does anybody other than me find it ridiculous that the harshest critics here are either anonymous or have a profile with no details and NO STORIES OF THEIR OWN? Put up or shut up and have the balls to write your own stories and subject yourself to the same criticism you dish out...
I agree with NaughtySouthernGent. Plus this story is good. Note it's a STORY. A narrative. Therefore the author is telling it at their own pace and with their own style. Keep it up PegasusRyder!