by PegasusRyder
It was enjoyable reading about the breakthrough of Jay and Barbie having intercourse. Personally, I'd like to see the plot progress to more man/wife relationship between them, but you are the author. As such, she would be permitted to tease other men, but maybe dialed-back a bit, so that direct viewing of the pussy and tits is not done. After all, a great stripper knows it isn't so much how much you show, but more how you tantalizing display glimpses and jack up the longing to see more.
Man please don't make Jay a freaking cuckold swinger sure but don't let Barbie get fucked by 4 different guys and Jay only get one piece of Ass that's just not fair