All Comments on 'Mom Named Barbie Ch. 20'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Enjoyed the breakthrough

It was enjoyable reading about the breakthrough of Jay and Barbie having intercourse. Personally, I'd like to see the plot progress to more man/wife relationship between them, but you are the author. As such, she would be permitted to tease other men, but maybe dialed-back a bit, so that direct viewing of the pussy and tits is not done. After all, a great stripper knows it isn't so much how much you show, but more how you tantalizing display glimpses and jack up the longing to see more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

I must agree with the previous comment.

happymuffinhappymuffinover 7 years ago
Very very good but...

Man please don't make Jay a freaking cuckold swinger sure but don't let Barbie get fucked by 4 different guys and Jay only get one piece of Ass that's just not fair

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