All Comments on 'Mom Named Barbie Ch. 25'

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More chapters with an adventure with the crew would be cool. Like a cruise with the regulars... Jim n Karen, Kandi, Terry n Alan...An intimate group scene. Anyway the story turned out good. Jay did not become a cuck.

Ryder,

Thank you. Loved Book One! Obviously this is a trilogy... ;-)

Love,

Kendallux

You write well. Five stars

Thank you for writing a very good story.. Well written. I enjoyed reading it. Looking forward to more writings from you... Again thank you

Barbie has a lot more slutiness to go with her son. Keep up the story and go deep into the lesbian and BDSM

Great story gave you 5 stars all the way through . it was well written and your character development fit the story's time table. Thanks

I really enjoyed your story! I hope to be able to read additional adventures

of "Barbie".

This was a great series of stories, everyday I looked forward to the next chapter. I hope, and look forward to seeing more from these characters.

Now that is a good chapter and a start to open another. This chapter bundle all into one complete. Here is the time to open new idea and experience for all to share. She can be trained and learn all month of only lesbian love as Jay watched and driected. Then a month of toys only. Later a charity event where she is payed for each partner and a contest. Showing all what she has learned and endurance.

I hope it's not the ending of your story! Thank you!

This could have ended on a high anytime in the last 4 chapters. To take any further you risk constantly repeating yourself and destroying the flow. Great story don't ruin it. I may be anonymous but never post defamitory things

I really enjoyed this story. I hope to see more of Barbi in the future.

Please continue this series or start another. This is the best mom son series for me.

Good read. Amazing you never got Barbies ass!

Well-crafted series. My only suggestion, if you should again take up the pen, is to make the chapters longer. The very short chapters disturbed the flow of the series. Thanks for sharing this story with us.