by Tigrist
It did not go as I was expecting but I enjoyed it all the same I look forward to reading more of your writing
In sorry but I didn't really like the story I'm a jealous type so the moment I see her fucking her son and calling me a boy I wouldn't stay I'd just leave and tell her to enjoy her "Man's " dick
Your first one was awesome! After reading it I immediately became a fan and could barely contain my excitement when I found out you made another one. Then I read this one and now I wish I hadn't. You had a great premises going on here which could have possibly extended into a short series, but then you had to toss in the gay sex completely from left field with no hint or warning which to put it simply ruined the story. You probably lost the interest of quite a few readers on this one but meh its your stories do as you will.
If your offended or jealous you LEAVE. You do not drug people so you can get your rocks off.
What garbage, you are a very sick ass-hole, I would have dumped her ass as soon as I saw her fucking her son. Why put yourself in that situation. Nothing left to see or feel, and the pregnant statement was uncalled for.