All Comments on 'Mom Sets Him Straight'

by CindysBob

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Good Story

I like a story in which Dad is not mistreated, disrespected or diminished. This was well done. Mom certainly is a firecracker and I think she deserves to get knocked up. Good Story. AnHoa Rifleman

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftabout 13 years ago
One excellent story

Almost all the way perfect.

Great job

YamiBoyYamiBoyover 12 years ago
^__^

Good story. Nice work! ^__^

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
NICE

CONTINUE

Padres61Padres61over 12 years ago
Nice

Very good story

RyeandGingerAyleRyeandGingerAyleover 11 years ago
Man! This is hot!

As the rifleman says, a story where dad is not humiliated or dissed, but instead excited by the mom-son action, is sooo much hotter - and appreciated. Well done...so far.

GlimseyeGlimseyealmost 10 years ago

Lovely story. Believable.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
What's next?

I would love to read about what happens next. Mom in a sandwich? Getting anal? Dped? The guys taking turns on her? Double blowjob?

SunloverSunloverover 9 years ago
Fantastic

Very erotic and stimulating. Well done.

GrrrreatImaginationGrrrreatImaginationabout 7 years ago
This was simply...

brilliant!

More detail? Sure. Great mechanics. Just loved your dialogue. And reading what a character is thinking & feeling is one of the sexiest things there is.

The mom in this story is such sexy person. It was really impressive to see her struggle with her desires, and embrace them. What a great man she married, too, eh? Loving, confident, trusting, encouraging, reassuring, and...um, probably as horny as she is.

I wouldn't mind seeing this turn into a series, if you've got ideas for the characters. Whether you do or not, I hope you keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
very sexy

mom and son both average but the sparks flew. keep up the good work BRB i'm looking for her to get doubled by dan and danny

auberge1auberge1over 6 years ago
Very well written

I enjoy stories where the husband and wife are equally important. They never lie to each other or leave him out of her decisions...

I hope you continue with the story...

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57about 6 years ago

I love the "mom has just the thing to help junior mend his ways" type of stories. I would have liked to have seen a followup chapter which ended with father and son dp'ing mom.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
5 stars .. Not sure how I missed this one

Great story!! I just don't understand how I missed this one since I checked your submissions periodically after first reading The Devil's Wage. I like how the father knew what was going to happen and didn't mind sharing his wife ... and with his son, no less! Very nasty and naughty. I know you don't usually do sequels, but I wouldn't mind the son joining the mom and dad in bed and watching everyone go at it, filming it, exchanging bodily fluids in every orifice. mmmmmmmmmmmm

HornyHub54HornyHub54almost 4 years ago
Wow. Incredible

Super story. The mom needed her deep desires filled and the Dad was more than happy to let the son fulfill. Respectful and hot. Love to read more. Maybe Dad gets to watch his son make Mom cum real hard from his cock in her.

Write more.

MajorRewriteMajorRewriteover 2 years ago

This is a 5-star romp. Good dirty fun.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Nice Fantasy. 5 Stars

muskyboymuskyboyover 1 year ago

Nice, but kind of an abrupt ending.

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