All Comments on 'Mom takes Her Son to Get a Massage'

Incredible is a word that actually means 'not credible' or 'not believable' - and that is precisely what this story was. I know that, when reading erotic fantasies, we're really supposed to 'leave our sense of credibility at the door' on the way in, but this tale stretched that notion in the extreme! The premise of a massage has been used in many other stories, to far better effect than in this one. The 'execution' of the story - the way the premise was handled in the writing - left much to be desired, when compared with earlier works by this author. A sense of "Something like this situation could really happen to some lucky teenage boy" is always helpful when I read stories on this site - and it's especially helpful in this Incest/Taboo genre!

I couldn't rate this above a '3'.

I enjoyed the story. What will happen when they get home?

i really enjoy'd story and i hope u continue to tell us more about the adventures of Todd and Marie and the masseuse

Considering many of your over stories I was looking forward to reading this one...boy was I disappointed. The idea for this story is a good one but it seems like it was written in about 5 minuets almost like the idea popped into your head and had to be written down and posted ASAP instead of taking your time for a build up.

It looks you haven't written anything since 'Three Days of Peace and Incest' in 2015 so maybe your a bit rusty. Please take your time next time and have a longer build up.

I do hope there is a second chapter but a longer one where they both have to deal with what happened before coming back together. I was expecting a slow seduction and a build up with the massage before the mother and son came together, not a rush job.

Mom wins, son wins, reader wins. Not sure what Mrs Jenkins gets out of it.

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would be more realistic if you didn't feel the necessity to taught a big cock, be a real man and fess up to what you really have, not 8"

Can you repost all your stories you had on Xnxx?

This one left my snatch wet, but I wish there was more to the story. I'd love to be fucked right now by my son.

I loved the story from the very beginning and I'm impatiently waiting for the next chapters.

Sometimes you wish that someone would direct you when you’re having these feelings that go against societal norms, to remove the guilt and responsibility.

Spelling, punctuation and grammar need attending to here. Perspective also seemed way off. Perhaps an edit or two before posting next time.

You accidentally replaced Ch. 1 with Ch.2

Sorry everybody. This story has been nothing but a pain in the ass since I decided to submit multiple chapters. I've asked Laurel to delete the whole mess and I'll try again later.

it seems that this and ch. 02 are the same ...

please take a look

Sure would be nice to read the first part

Could you post the first part? Only asking cos your writing is nop notch

Nice part 2 but would be better understood if I can read ch1 first

very hot story, thanks !

Please post first part

Sure would be nice to read the first part

where is the first part???

Hello, Chapter 1 is missing. instead it's chapter 2 twice. good story, would like to read the beginning.

Great story, would love to read chapter one though.

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You still haven't fixed this error? There is no chapter 1

would like to read part one