All Comments on 'Mom the Superheroine - Extended'

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BammyBammyover 8 years agoAuthor
Requests

Thanks for the feedback people!

I have just got back to writing the third addition to this series today after a lengthy break and have seen that the common request for my story is to include impregnation, specifically of Barbara. I'll definitely put it in there but I was also wondering what else you guys wanted? Any other ideas?

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

I like the previous comment. Barbara gets pregnant, and her enemy Valerie takes the baby away as soon as it is born. Val gets the pleasure of breastfeeding her enemies new baby!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
One of the best Superheroine stories ever!

I'd love to see Barbra's back broken, her body totally broken then impregnated as she is barely able to move, her arms almost useless, her legs barely able to walk, her belly pregnant, she turns to drugs to forget the pain and humiliation.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
A good story.

Now lets see them taken by a few guys and impregnated.

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