All Comments on 'Mom to the Second Power'

For a first story I have to say that it was nicely done. It read like it was a little bit of a fantasy, but still very erotic.

I hope to see more of your work, Thanks for the read

I have never heard a breast giggle before. Please tell us the real name of the woman, she will be a zillionaire soon!

...breast 'jiggle' instead of breast 'giggle'? Spell-check wouldn't catch it, and a soft-g sounds like a 'j' -- simple mistake, especially for ESLs.

It was different, not sure what my view on that is right now. But it was definitely not what I was expecting, and that goes a long ways when you read stories in this section.

By the way, anonymous users who bash others and hide who they are just hypocrites. Pay them no mind, for they have none of their own.

I enjoy your story. It wasn't the hottest I read but I read it with interest. I hope the chapter 2 will be even better.

Awesome story.

I do no know if there is an age when humans simply become nonsexy.