All Comments on 'Mom was an Addict Ch. 03'

I don't think you needed the scene between Gary and John, but that's my opinion. Here is a fact, though, you need an editor, or you need to do a better job of proofreading.

When you had John sexually approach Gary I stopped reading right then. That totally and completely ruined this story. I will not finish a story that has this crap in it. This story was definitely in the wrong category. I don't like to have this come in a story when I'm not looking for it. The readers should have been warned.

Warren

It sucked that it led to John wanting to suck a dick for being a virgin and getting it rough from the other son. It was a great story outside that nosense

it became a whore story 1 star