by Momstheboss
When I was around 23 (best guess) I fucked this woman old enough to be my grandmother. Truly disgusting hygiene but sure was good at sucking cock and we did almost everything. Funny thing is I was her first to do doggy. Anyway it grosses me out still even though I am in my 40s. Your story reminds me of that instead of all the moms I fucked. *
"I am a cute little, light brown Chow bitch. You are a big bold, big cock, Burmese Mountain dog. You have been sniffing my furry ass...Ohh fuck yes!"
Bernese, not Burmese, different parts of the world entirely. Check before you write, idiot.
Excellent writing . Seriously the son should take massage courses to deflect at least partially the sexual demands from mommy dearest. She's turning into a maternal succubus. I wonder if mom can attract a caretaker boyfriend ? There's When men who would assume bulk of household duties just for carnal tradeoff.
Anyway I'll say excellent writing once more . It wasn't erotic, but the desire for an intimate connection burned in this depiction.
Full marks.
but don't go along with the story not being erotic. I love the line, "Take your trophy. Take your mother's pussy." I sure wish that had been my own mom's attitude!
I couldn't get into the whole "MD" thing. Just didn't draw me in. I'm confident that you'll have another story up fairly quickly, and I expect I'll enjoy it. This one? Not so much.
It is a very realistic situation of grown son taking care of mom. After initial awkwardness, both become more comfortable. Often progresses to some kind of sex. It can be wonderful.
I beg... yes beg of you to proof read your work a lot before submitting it.. I don't like working so hard to get off. OMG!! learn English before trying to write stories.