All Comments on 'Mom Will Never Know'

Are you planning on expanding these characters in a mother story

Are you going to do a sequel?

... but a sequel with the three together would be dynamite.

Definately needs a sequel, thanks for a great story

It would be a shame not to make this a sequel or a series. Great story!

Oh this story made me laugh so hard with the twists. Well written, very engaging story. Thanks!

I admit that having not enjoyed your previous April Fool's Day incest entry, I thought about skipping this one. Glad I didn't! This embodied all that's fun about the category for me.

It was hot and sexy and there was some conflict, but nothing too serious and the twist ending was fun as well. 5 stars

one of the very best, good story line with a nice build up. but now you have reached such lofty heights, I hope you can keep it going, looking forward to more.

Extremely well done....sensual...sexy...sublime!!!!

not bad although he was barefoot to be quiet, then had to take his shoes off?

Great story, would like to see another chapter!

Brilliant story, well written, good plot. Well

worth the 5 stars

You have a great imagination. The twists and turns were surprising. I appreciate stories that aren't just the wham bam thanks maam type stories.

Awesome storyline rather than those wham bam thank you mam stories...well written

That was one of the hottest stories I've ever read,

HOT!

That was one of the hottest stories I've ever read, Dam

As always you never disappoint LC

Got this girl's panties all wet

Venus

You even got my tongue hard!

One of the best...

One hell of a story...I was hard all the time...

& I read it twice :)

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That is such a hot story - love to hear more involving all 3 of them!!!

Absolutely the best story!! I'd give it 10 stars if I could. You pushed every single one of my perv buttons with this one! A second chapter would be great with the 3 of them going at it at the same time! Thanks LC68!!!

So much fun and hotness! I loved it. Thanks a lot for your effort and keep up the great work. 5 stars! ^__^

Very good read.. VERY HOT. I look forward to reading a second chapter involving the three of them. Keep writing! You are a natural.

Great read LC! The story flowed well and you gave us some 'hot bits' featuring mom before her son got to her to get us thinking she was as hot as Mike did! The blindfold scene was hot and that was a sexy twist at the end.

Well done, five stars from this now horny girl and good luck in the contest

4 stars because he didn't cum inside and impregnate his mom

One of the best I've read in a long time.... good job!!!

Yeah thats hot as hell mate bloody brilliant read it had my cock as hard as a rock very hot indeed need a follow up story see how things progress

More like Tie Your Mother Down, but without the venom. Knew from half way through that mamma was enjoying the taste of her own "bambino". Oh yeah...TIE YOUR MOTHER DOWN!

LOVED this story! Hopefully you write Pt.2 I would love reading Mike taking his mother's ass! Also a DP with his dad would be cool. Very much a 5 star story! More Please!!!

Very erotic with a nice twist at the end. I hope you'll do a second chapter.

Excellent

Awesome.

This was a really good story. I was wondering how you would get around the son fucking his mom and she being unaware he wasn't her husband. There are too many things that she would notice as different. You handled it well. The story was an easy read with good grammar and only a few typos. Kudos!

by one of my favorite authors. It was a wonderful story to stand alone or maybe one more chapter or two while the mom and son get over on dad and then lets him know.

Would like to read more of this son fucking his mother everywhere and maybe all day.

This story was so damn hot. You absolutely HAVE TO write additional chapters for this story. Did I mention how hot the story was yet? Just checking, lol.

Awesome as always, LC. Would like to see another chapter that involves mom, dad, and son. Would also like to see son and Cindy get it on, and then bring her unto the fold. Keep up the good work.

Lots of cheap porn without any real romance that feels like you're selling out or something because most of ur other stoires are much bettr than this one.

I only like incest stories that are well written and I like this one. Thank you for sharing.

Ahaz

I agree with the other anonymous comment.. There has to be atleast a little bit of romance in there

best story I have read in years

This is fantastic. Amazing descriptions...

Well done !!!!!

Poor boy is being manipulated left and right. Dad knows all right and he's not at work. Dear old dad is behind the curtain furiously masturbating to the sight of his wife riding his son. He just has another fantasy, one where his wife "cheats" on him with their son and the mother is more than happy to give the dad a show.

I don't care if Dad set me up to fuck my Mom only to find they were both in on it from the begining ... Just do her and enjoy the hell out of it.

Will we get to read a sequel? This is a personal favorite for sure

well that's a new one, the dad stays in the picture for once. and even better, is thrilled to let his son fuck his wife.

god damn that is family fun at its best! moar moar!!

I fucking loved this story it had me so hot.

Did not see that coming. I hope you won

How many times did he take his shoes off?

Wow, I would give you 7 stars if I could! I only saw my parents fuck a couple times through a door, it would be hot on camera.

Many sons want to fuck their moms, and you tell a great story that brings it all out. It would have been hot for the mom and son to pretend again for the Dad, but on camera the son pulls her blindfold off and fucks her silly for the Dad.

Please write the next chapter!

Just really enjoyed this tale...I like a tale where the dad is cool with this scenario...as opposed to being a simple dupe. As always you craft things well...crisp dialogue, good pacing...patience.

When I was young...very early teens...I happened upon a little treasure trove in the form of a dozen or so poloroids of my modest, demure Mom in various stages of undress until she was finally stripped naked and down on her knees with a thick cock...my Dad's, least that's who's I hope it was... at various stages of penetration in her pretty mouth...that final shot of her open mouth filled with sperm, oozed over her lips with me til this day. We didn't have a Poloroid camera, so I can surmise he borrowed it for this photo shoot.

Very well scripted and organized. Language by mother was terrific. The surprise of the see-through blindfold was diabolical and super.

You wrote:

((( I was barefoot, (BAREFOOT) but still took the stairs slowly, careful to avoid the one with the creak that had given me away more than once when I'd snuck in late from dates a few times. )))

And THEN you wrote:

((( I carefully slipped my shoes off, (???) wondering why I had even worn them and remained silent as I approached the bed, )))

How the fuck could you make such a dumb error, to begin with... much less not catch it during proof-reading??? Do you realize what a brain dead sadsack that makes you look like?? You had a decent story going and then revealed yourself to be a half-assed fuckup.

((( she was right here all wrapped up like a gift for me, but as I kicked my shoes off and eased my boxers down, I wasn't sure if I could. )))

How many feet does this freak have??? If he gets his mom pregnant, how many feet will the kid have?

I'm speechless. Other than wow! Very hot. I love it.

Going off like a rocket, all women can’t take an eight inch cock in her mouth and the lick the balls with tongue 👅 please describe the sex different with each story! Looks like copy and paste.

If they don't like your stories too -erhm , well tell em not to read them. I fuckin loved it! Great story! Keep the peace!!!

First he was barefoot, then he had shoes on...TWICE?

You wrote:

"I was barefoot, but still took the stairs slowly, careful to avoid the one with the creak that had given me away more than once when I'd snuck in late from dates a few times."

Then you wrote:

"I carefully slipped my shoes off, wondering why I had even worn them and remained silent as I approached the bed, my cock now fully hard and straining to be free of my jeans."

And then you wrote:

"I could, she was right here all wrapped up like a gift for me, but as I kicked my shoes off and eased my boxers down, I wasn't sure if I could."

I think this story was great, I really don't see the reason people are making such a fuss about a simple error. We all make errors and mistakes, We're all only human :)

I loved this story, one of the best ever!

********** HOT AS FUCK !!!

I had hoped the story never ended!!! This is THEE BEST STORY I HAVE EVER READ!!! Please, write more!!!

One hot story! I would love to see more of this family dynamic! I realize you are now writing for another site! Please consider doing a series on that site of this family! Thank you for sharing your talent and imagination!

That was hooot, i would like to see more of this family, thanks for writing.

My favorite story by far. Told very well, the build up, description of Mike fucking her brains out, while “Mom doesn’t know”, then mom revealing the truth.

I’d love to read the next phase and how they get to next step of just letting him fuck mom while everyone knows.

This story was written well except for a few area here and there stretching. Had me hot pretty much all the way. But this story really needs a sequel. You left us readers hanging with mother and son in the kitchen, so needs more. there were real sensual parts when mother is blindfolded and son starts off just caressing his mother laying there. Wish you would write more (*_*)

Excellent story..... completed in a.single shot

Your stories are great as the last part of Mommy revealing the blindfold was see-thru and she wanted a special time was a sweet Surprise and puts a twist on the whole thing.. Hot Mommy Slut and now they have a boy toy and kinky threesome and DP in her future..

Absolutely beautiful writing! Please give us some more! Part 2,3,4 and more if possible!

THE BEST STORY I HAVE EVER READ.

Supercalifragalisticexpialidocious!

5 stars - BEST EVER!

Thoroughly enjoyed this story just like all the rest of your stories. The only thing that bothered me was that the son taped his parents without their permission. Even though they discovered the cameras and tapes, for a 20 year old man to do this demonstrates a total lack of respect for his parents. With that said, this is a 5 star effort.

Holy shit what an awesome story. I definitely need a sequel or series!

Much better than your other slock.

Wow! Really loved this story

Fabulous. I really enjoyed it. Good character development. I thought this was going in one direction for a finale having mom quietly mention that she recognized something which clued her in, but you took it another direction which shows you are far better than me. Either would have been fine, but your ending was superb. Thanks so much for your efforts.

(9/4/2022) Okay, I’ve passed up this story many times for a couple of years now. I’m not into fam orgies with multiple male members especially when daddies are included. But I figured I’d finally give this narrative a shot. I’m glad I finally did. This was brilliant! This was an easy five stars. And dad.., will never know.

Seriously hot.

You are an amazing writer. This was a work of art. 100 stars if I could.

Great story and extremely well-written!

I loved this we need more of this family!

Good story, believable. I’ll bet there are men and women who read this story and went right out and purchased cameras.

Part Next... he finds out dad has cameras of his own all through the house and was watching a mom confessed...

Excellent Story! 5/5

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If it was fun to write, I think it was more fun to read. This is going to be an interesting family, and I would like to read more about them.

Beautiful story about a family exploring how to please each other 🤗 😘 please continue ..

You're a fucking Maestro.