All Comments on 'Mom Witnesses an Incestuous Kiss'

story but i was really dissapointed that he didnt fuck his mom hope you make it right in part 2 if it comes

I've a rough idea of the Thanksgiving family/commune fest in which case Carlos and his mother would certainly attend, and perhaps properly link up.

I loved the threesome action. With all of the ass licking and play, I was wondering why Carlos didn't do any anal penetration of either of his partners, or maybe some prostate massage by one of his ladies on him.

A very yummy story that got better as it went along! Looking forward to part two :) thank you!

Great threesome story. Hope you will write pt2 soon.

bigmg – I’m not sure if there’ll be part 2 as I’m mulling over this Thanksgiving story where the mom & son from the Lookalike stories will also be there. But thanks for the encouragement.

TSreader – I like “yummy”. Thanks very much for it.

blackknight – Shirley was a character from my Lookalike stories where she’d already stated that she disliked anal. As for Anita in this one, I wanted to hold some things back for a future encounter. But thanks very much for the comment.

I did enjoy that story, the subtle beginning of being naked, the intimate conversations all added up to the weekend away with sylvia and so let the more intimacy begin.

I too would like to read a part two away for the hippy hippy shake.

Congrats, well put together, along with excellent spelling and grammer added to an enjoyable read. 9/10 😀

Too long and drawn out, become boring.

Jagnag – Thanks very much. I like to have a build-up before the sex takes place. It just seems more plausible as to how a mother and son would overcome such an imposing societal taboo. And I’m relieved that I didn’t have too many typos.

Anon (boring) – Thanks at least for explaining why you found it boring. It reminds me that I should add an extra disclaimer up front (as I’ve done in previous stories) that the sex will take a while to develop.

... it was very erotic in the build-up and the culmination, and the humour had me chuckling throughout. I don't think I've seen your name before, so I'm off to read some more of your stories now in the hope that they will be as enjoyable and as well-written.

Loved The squirrel parts that was just fantastic....

Anon (enjoyed) – I’m glad you liked the build-up. I only started writing here because too few stories had that. You can see from comments here and stories elsewhere that plenty of readers like to get to the sex quickly, but I’d rather explore the gradual change in mindset for a mother and son to take such an unusual step.

Anon (funny) – Thanks very much. There’s absurdity in much of life and I try to point to it when it occurs to me.

Looking forward t the Thanksgiving get together story

Liked any new angle and and at the start I was reading not knowing how it was going to progress, it was very good

I very much liked the first half of the story, when it was just mom and son, and they appeared to be headed into a real romantic love. But bringing in the aunt and the endless round of all kinds of sexual alternatives eventually became sort of boring eventually. And the ass licking was exceedingly distasteful to me. One other thing bothers me, sort of jarring each time it is mentioned--comparing nipples to fish hooks. What on earth is there about nipples that could in any way look like fish hooks? Certainly doesn't sound very tempting to me. Sorry, but I could come up only with a 3 this time.

Don't listen to that anon, I found the asslicking exceedingly hot. If anything, part 2 should include even more asslicking.

Nice, slow burn...my dick hurts. I'm saving my load for someone special but wanted to explode for 20 minutes.

Too long, son too reluctant.

Took too long to get to anything good. A snail reads faster than you develop this story. I fell asleep somewhere on page 2.

OMG! Until the Spin the bottle session I absolutely hated Carlos. You wrote this character like a spineless nitwit who could be jerking off with mom's wet panties one minute and refusing to let her touch his cock the next. Sexy dialog and actions from mom roll out like honey and Carlos is offended? Jesus H Christ! This must be what pegging is like. Are you just screwing with us? Clearly you are capable of writing erotic stories and sustaining a storyline then providing new characters and plot twists building to a climax. Perfect ending, wrapping up one story while leaving the door open to new characters in foreshadowed erotic situations. This tells me you know what you are doing but the first chapters of this story make me wonder if a brilliant second half justifies a look at your future works.

SMH

Didn't like it much. Anita is a PITA busybody with an overactive imagination. The son is a wuss. Couldn't get past the first page. Not as good as your other stories.

Not as good as the other 3 or 4 of your stories I read until now. Carlos let it go pretty far, including the mutual masturbation in the shower, before he puts his food down, resulting in his mother taking some psychoactive drugs. What a character to let it come to this.

On the other hand I already wasn't to keen on some of the author's descriptions in other stories, about pussy lips being 'not too long' (or to thin, to thick). What the heck is that even supposed to mean? But in this story "the guy" is hooked up on fish hook shaped nipples? What a strange fascination. It's a fetish I never even read or heard about and is better left out of a story, unless it's especially catering to people with the same kink, which I guess are some rare species in this case. I find it rather distracting if not disturbing, next you tell us about a guy fascinated with a girl with a horizontally oriented slit down there...

Some of the very best authors here who write stories about relationships, emotions, conflicts and so on even refrain almost completely from describing distinct bodily features....

this was a hot story, i love build ups, and this had it all, i hope there is a continuation the the Hippie party. 5 star