All Comments on 'Mommy Dear'

Give it up! You have neither the command of english or grammer to be called a writer.

This has got to be one the absolute shittiest stories ever written. My God, please...give it up.

It reads like it was written by someone not very experenced in sex. Although some of the story is good. Anytime a mother is enslaved by her son then empregnanted by him makes for a good story line. The author needs to work on building characters and having the story flow more evenly. Try writing with love in your heart instesd of just lust, and you'll find that the story will be more life like. Thanks for the post....Rich

If you have a day job, don't give it up as you certainly don't have a potential career as an author!

are you related to SamuelX, by any chance, or did you just go to the same school of crappy writing?

Not only can you not write, you are mathematically stupid!!! According to your first sentence the mother was nine (9) years old when the son was born, not very likely when the large majority of human females reach puberty and the ability to conceive some years later than this. Give it up!!!!

I don't usually leave comments but after this story I just had to! WOW!!!!! This is the worst damn story I have read. I can't swim so i stay my ass out of the pool. You can't write so keep you ass of the keyboard

Please, are we to be spared nothing? There is no passion, no reason, just a lame type of logic that says you have to have your Mum. Why? We don't know. Perhaps the reason is because you've read a real good incest story and want to show off? Go to school, study English Literature, read more - much, much more - and when your voice changes, and you actually have had at least one love affair, then try writing a few stories, and then bin them. You might get the knack after a few tries.

I was going to leave a comment but guess what ...... I retracted it

No, you're the one that's mathematically challenged. 38-19= 19, not 9.

Fucking retard

Given the poor language, lack of grammar and punctuation and absolutely no understanding of sex, I'm guessing you are a thirteen-year-old with a word processor and spellchecker.

This type of story has been written a thousand times (yes I am guilty of writing son/mother sex stories) but it has been done a thousand times better.

Try writing again when you finish high school!!!

Unrealistic story!!!

No man in his right would treat his Mother That way

If the jerks who've commented so negatively were aiming to destroy this young man self-confidence--he's in his mid-20s--they've probably succeeded (but I really hope not). Kevin's real interested in the topic of motherfucking, as lots of guys his age are. Kev may be a real-life motherfucker (that I really hope he is!). He's also very generous and open-hearted--check out his extensive list of favorites. How about some constructive criticism, rather than the raw malice shown so far? Kevin, don't let these limp-dicks smother your creative drive. I trust I'll see some more of your fine contributions in the future.