All Comments on 'Mommy Gets a Mommy Ch. 01'

I enjoyed the start to your story. I am looking forward to see where you go with this.

Especially something so ridiculous as this.

Definitely can't wait to read more.

Poorly conceived and poorly written with cardboard characters spouting inane dialogue. Barely good for a laugh at how bad it was. UGH!

Just a load of

Great start, waiting for the next chapter

Ass spanked red, given orders to have pussy shaved, hair dyed platinum blonde, dressed like a teen slut, reduced to sleeping on floor in smallest room of house, satisfy desires of 18 year old new mommy, used by others and all that. Ease to cow into signing away all her rights including half of the fortune for a nominal one dollar. In the end reduced to a prostitute to earn her keep for a sadistic black pimp.

I would shoot both their asses right there and then. Can easily claim you snapped after seeing the daughter with the hubby.

I liked it

I don't know why I find it so hot, it's obviously a bit far fetched, but.. Im waiting for the next part.