All Comments on 'Mommy Mistress Ch. 03'

by Sean Renaud

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Awsome

Please don't end this series it rocks

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
keep going!

this a hot series!!! there is much more that slut can do!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
amazing, more please

excellent story, must add to it. I really liked it when she was wearing her super mini skirt & tight shirt, would be excellent if she were that as her full time slut outfit when she wants action. Have her addicted to her newfound lifestyle.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Please Stop

You wanted feedback, well, you got it. You can stop here.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Great story

please don't stop, this story is hot in all it's elements: The domination, incest, etc.... Surely she has more to learn

oldwinooldwinoover 17 years ago
More

More! She needs a gangbang.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Very good! Keep going!

This story needs a suite!

I'm waiting for it!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Keep it going

Very good story. Don't stop now. There's still a lot that Jesse needs to learn and experience. Two guys at a time; three guys at a time; rimming, etc. Seven (7) more chapters should accomplish that.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Just read it.

Chapter 3 was written over 3 years ago. This was an excellent story. The only person to tell you to stop was a lesbian. All the "MEN" gave it a 100 score. You really should consider continuing this story. As one of the other commenters wrote, "She has a lot to learn." And this is the perfect vehicle to teach her. Seven to 10 more chapters might accomplish that goal.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Follow Up

You wrote this story over 3 years ago and stated that if you got enough feedback you'd continue the series. All the feedback was positive and this was one of your highest rated stories. It's time for at least 3 more chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Awesome

This was an awesome story. I would like it very much if Mary made Jesse call her Mistress and became Mary's little House Slut. Mark should be Jesse's Stud and she could play Brood Mare to His Stallion. Mary should Own them both.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
amazing write more

I really like where you're going with this, and wherever you take it I'll be sure to follow

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

very nice.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
more

whens Ch. 04 coming?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Awesome

This was a great story, but expand the Vocab. Some of your words were a huge turn off. Like "bunghole," or her telling her mother to pack her shit. Nasty.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
I liked this

I liked this and would like to read more.

aperez18aperez18almost 11 years ago
Awesome series

I just loved this series, it got me so hard and left me wanting to read more. Please continue with the conversion of slutty Jesse.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Good Rating

This story had a good rating and should have been continued. There were still numerous acts that the daughter should have been taught. I liked this story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
This series is awesome

You should really write more

jamesn100jamesn100over 8 years ago

great read, definitely more wanted

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
good start

the daughter needs to be fisted in the ass and pussy at the same time.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Awesome

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Mommy Mistress is a great story but it needs some pee play. Mommy Mistress needs to give Jesse a golden shower & teach her to enjoy it. Mommy Mistress then needs to make Jesse lick her pussy after she pees & then drink her pee straight from her pussy.

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