All Comments on '"Mommy-Slut": A Battle of Wills'

In fact great, Right back to form Jasmine, after some slight slips lately. Please keep it up!

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I hope there's more where the mother son duo fuck the

mother daughter duo. That would be hot for them to

double team each of them.

Awesome story. Like the twists back and forth. One of the best you have written in awhile

This was almost too much for my computer, let alone my poor old ticker! What sexy stories you write -- and this is one of your very finest. Thank you so much -- five stars and favourited!

Love your stories. This was hot and one of the best on this site.

Really well written. You created so many characters that you're almost duty-bound to continue this story!

Well !!!!!!!!! all I can say is, the best fucker is a motherfucker. Thanks for the hottest read in a long time.

Loved it! So fucking hot!! Hopefully there will be another chapter where Jeremy dumps Casey and brings home Eleanor for mother and son to enjoy.

sexy and erotic, loved it and will read more from you.

I hope you can add more chapters to this story. It's very hot.

fucking amazing as always, made me cum

if you decide to continue with this series can you please not make the mom lose all of her personality. I LOVE your incest stories but the a problem i usually have when i read them is that the woman loses all personality and work life and becomes a full time slut. Can you please not do that with this story if you decide to continue?

When I shared my idea with Jasmine to write the story, I could never have imagined the story would be so awesome. Don't get me wrong, I had full confidence in her writing skills but this story is epic. It is far better than anything I originally envisaged.

Thank you for such an erotic read. Hope there will be many parts to come.

Really great story. Wanna read more.

Thank you for returning back to incest. Those incest stories are really your best work on this site, especially when you get a dominate sister or mother to be turned into a submissive by one of their family members.

Hope to see Tiffany and Mrs. Anderson commit mother-daughter incest and then have a three on one with Jeremy and Kiera.

Very yummy indeed! Thank you!

Another great story of yours. Hoping you decided more chapters for this one. Would love Jeremy/Mom/Mrs. Anderson threesome.

Hi

Thanks for all the nice comments.

This was a story I hadn't seriously considered as a sequel.

So suggestions?

And yes, I will make sure to keep the mom a string-willed character.

Jasmine

Agree with the others. A sequel (or several!) please. Agree that a threesome with Mrs Anderson/mom/Jeremy would be hot. And an eventual lead in to bring Tiffany into the mix would be awesome. Great story (as always) Jasmine

Is it really the end? I hope there's a lot more to come.

I agree that there should be a coming together of the characters, presumably with a hierarchy established (I particularly like Eleanor!) but I think the underlying theme that should be maintained is the risk of being caught (and actually being caught). That means keeping some characters (like Mr Anderson) out of the hierarchy so there is someone to hide from!

I agree that a sequel would be pretty cool. Especially sense you created a lot of characters to play with. Could have the mother make the sons girlfriend become a pet of hers. Have Eleanor open up and become a dom to other women and sub to Jeremy. Have neighboring mother and daughter play together with mother and son or many other options. Hope to see more of this story!

Oh god this hot .reminds me of my mom an useing her

Please keep this one going. 😘

I've read a number of your stories over the years, and I think this is far and away one of the better ones. You did a great job with the reversal of power.

Excellent as always Jasmine, start of another good series. Mum, son and Eleanor, then include the neighbours, the permutations are endless.

As always, another 5 star story. Hopefully this is the start of another hot series.

loved the story but was looking forward for a change when the mother would actually be the dominant and the boy the pet but it was of course like most of your stories amazing

Hope they continue in new chapters. Would love to see them as Master and Mistress over many pets.

This was one of your hottest stories yet. I hope this becomes a good long series would love to see what happens when they get the two sluts from across the street into a foursome

You are still my favorite writer at Literotica because you write with passion, tell a great story, create characters and sexual situations that could "raise the dead, and use the English language the way it's supposed to be used. Thank you.

I would LOVE to see more of this if you'd be willing to write it!!

You definitely have not lost your touch Jasmin - a wonderful story and hopefully there will be a follow up

Is Jeremy going to treat "mommy slut" like he does with his other sluts? Like constantly pushing her boundaries, mom is a working woman which leaves a lot of room for our author to push her to her limits and might take us to an unchartered territory for a :mommy slut".

Looking forward to read what Jeremy might do to keep us glued!

Well done again silkstockingslover.

I would of preferred them be equal and willing partners rather than dom and sub... May be the can be equal and terrorise their pets

Please add second chapter 5 Stars

Another winner Jasmine. I do see this hot story being ripe for a sequel or two. As some others have said, I'd like to see Kiera and Jeremy be somewhat even in the long run, but can definitely see them dominating so many others.

You definitely need to write a sequel to this, would like to see some Elenor and Kiera action!

More please!

I'd like to see more reversals. The mom should regain control and peg her son.

Can't we have a son I mean a man who treats all the woman as sluts or wants to turn them into sluts and he has no reservations for his mom either.....his ultimate goal is to humiliate every woman comes in his way, so the mom has to go through all the necessary "trainings" her son sees fit!

JAZ - Five Stars * * * * *

Great story, solid throughout. Better than ever?

Best

Jack Auff

"Role reversal" always a fun time with mom and dad. Mommy-was a excellent tutor. Daddy and mom are amenable to a new experience in the world of the forbidden fruit. That is the best of erotic incest and incorporating the fun of "Family Fucking and Fetishes" is a prime concern for those so inclined and high heels, lingerie, silk, satin panties, pantyhose are all a little more than a betterment of the forbidden fruit.

I would love to see the two of them work on Eleanor and maker her their joint play toy. I would also love to see Kiera peg those judges and lawyers!

Overall, great story! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

i don't feel the son has learned anything, he hasn't changed one bit at the end of this part. basically remaining the same as his father used to be. if this has a sequel, the mother needs to be clear about what she sees he's doing and why he should be straight to his different girls: either they all know they're not exclusive at the very least, or he stops. at his "consequence" question? i wouldn't have answered first, made the lesson and then answered after that with a yes. and then explained the situation as it was with his father. the only reason he doesn't break up with the main girl is laziness and the old "what would the others think". pressure point for the mother to use in the future? maybe. anyway... that was one of the things i thought at the end of this :)

You really outdid yourself. I love the stocking theme in so many of your stories. You are my go to read when I have a little adult time on my hands.

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I enjoyed your story alot I have also enjoyed your other stories as well great job

The good reviews I read. This story was terrible, filled with overdone stereotypes. The son was already a cocksman, having had his way with the choicest of his high school and many adult women at about 18 years of age. His mom is a broken-in submissive (by his father) with a successful career, and naturally a long way to fall from a lofty perch. To be honest, I skipped pp. 2-5, so I don't know if things ever got interesting because the start was so banal and overdone. This kid led a miracle life - more than anything I've read so far, and that's a great deal. He didn't have to work for anything. Yes, it's a fantasy, but it involves some literary ability. If it wasn't porn, it would be outright plagiarism. And why in the world does the son always have to be 18...or even older? Where's the challenge? If authors can write about 13-year-old girls, what about boys and older women? Too challenging? Or too much work? Sorry, it really wasn't so awful, but it wasn't good. Try again; you could be on the cusp if you devise a more challenging - even vulgar - theme.

Having reread this, can we get a prequel? To learn how Eleanor, Mrs. Anderson and Tiffany become submissive sluts to Jeremy and his mom respectively.

Excellent story, Wounderful sexual descriptions. Would have liked a couple of more days at the end to describe all the fantastic mine blowing sex anal etc. looking foreward to your next story!

Nice little turn about take. Throwing in the two across the street was a nice touch. Maybe a follow-up?

Over sized cock, large tits, women who can't resist him, same old tired crap. Skimmed pages 3-5 and am glad I didn't waste a lot of time on it.

nice stories. id really like to know what happened between Jeremy, kiera, elanor, Tiffany and the rest of the women.

So I fell in love with this story when Mommy turned the tide on her son. Was really hoping she would make her son the cum slut. Then the story reverted to man once again rules over woman. And sadness prevailed. Such potential lost. Even equals at the very end - ruling man/women would have been nice.

Excellent story of dominance and submission tho I must admit I was hoping Kiera would have dominated her son before he turned the tables on her as I knew he would ~ that would have made this story scalding hot ~ lol ~ it was already boiling! Thank you :)

We need to hear more about these two can't wait

You pulled me in and rang my bell. Thanks for a great story

this is the first time ive ever written a comment after reading a submission and fuck this was by far the best ive ever read. after reading almost every story in this listing i must say your story made me say (oh shit) and i started to believe it was really happening right before my very eyes...

with that said you should be very happy with what has been written.

congrats... (like my pre-mature ejaculation)...

thank you very much for one of the best reads ive ever had.

You are a really great writer, this is one of the best stories ever..., i highly encourage you to continue writing more and more stories...

I really love this story. I would very much like to see what your kinky mind can come up with to further this one. Please do a sequel

I swear I cannot get enough of your stories. Even stuff that I'm not into, stuff I didn't think would turn me on.... the way you write, it all turns me on. Absolutely incredible!

Use proper tags.

Great story! Would love to hear about him fucking his mom's ass and then all of his mothers pets and of course a foursome with Mrs Anderson and her daughter.

Really liked the weird relationship between Jeremy and his Mother. Can't believe this has no sequel since, for some reason, I came to hope Eleanor and Jeremy would end up together. Anyways great story as always.

Thank you Jasmin, Another great story. I know I’m sounding the same with each of these comments but you’re story’s are all so good and my dyslexic brain makes it difficult for me to come up with any new ones. Be assured that any comment from me at all is really high praise in my books. I wish my life could contain just 1/10 of the excitement i reed about here. I’m slowly getting through all your great tails here in london.. k

I really enjoyed this story. I remember stoking my mothers nylon encased thighs when was about 4 or 5 years old. Yes I used to get an erection from.

Never get let down when reading one of your stories. As usual a great sexy story.

I usually hate dom/sub stories, I don't like people being degraded, but despite that, I'm ashamed to confess I liked part of this story. In most dom/sub stories the dom doesn't care about his/her sub and I hate it. In this story the son cares about his mother, unlike many other stories where the dom doesn't mind hurting even the ones he/she should love, raping, or making them do things they don't want to do.

I'd like this story to continue but I'm afraid I wouldn't like the sequel, because I'm afraid he would make her mother screw other guys, and that is something I don't like at all. I'd like the story to continue with them being closet sluts and only among them.

As usual, this was really good! I always love Mommy-son stories. My story is a lot different, becaue I am the submissive.

Wow wow. Your stories are always amazing 🤩.

Thank you

a little better than most i've read here so far keep up the good work

It's hot and different. But somehow the ending sort of left me sort of empty.

Very hot story. Hope it continues

Very good!, But what happens next?

LeB

Amazing story. Truly so wonderful

Good story, but I have a problem with this and many of your stories that portray the husband as dead or missing in action for some reason, and he always seems to have a small and unexciting cock while the son seems to be greatly endowed. I’d like to read where the man is in control and the son can follow his lead. Seems like I read one of yours with that theme, but most have weak or nonexistent men. I guess that helps in the structure of the story, but it gets old (and repetitive) to me. There are a lot of good men in the world!

Iasmine, this is the first one of your stories I ever read. I didn't know, then, just how much excellence drips from your pen, even more than from any flowing frisson of femininity...(sometimes I wonder if I've read *too* much of your work)...

...still clements my cockles...punishes my pressors...tenses trousers...taughtens testes...I could go on...just like your characters...butt I think you grasp my coign of vantage. *****

Mi

As always, your writing was truly outstanding. I have to say I was very happy to see that, at the end, mother and son were loving each other and enjoying their new relationship. I was afraid that the mother would be turned into a demeaned, victimized submissive, as she was with the father, rather than what appears to be happening - she will be the submissive in the relationship but a loving relationship nonetheless. I really hoped, and was happy to see, that the son was not like the absolutely useless asshole of a father who was barely worthy of the title sperm donor, and nothing else. Your writing, as always, was tremendously erotic, and although I enjoyed some parts more than others, overall, I loved your writing, as always. I am glad that you have continued to write and are as prolific and talented as you are. Thank you for the hours of pleasure you have gifted your readers... There's something to think about. If you took all your stories, multiplied by all your readers, then multiplied that by average number of hours each reader spent with your stories, imagine the number of hours of pleasure you have given readers from this website. Personally, I can't count that high. Congratulations.

Good and hot, but he should have knocked her up, to permanently cement his dominance over her.

Didn't even go pass the stupid part with the strap on and the son. He would have told her to fuck off instead of being a little bitch.

An extremely interesting premise.

Congratulations on her another excellent story, the attempt by Keira to top Jeremy was an unusual twist as were her tactics.

I am sad about this story. She could have helped him learn what *loving* submission looks like instead of this mess of a fight for dominance. Given the bullshit from the asshole who mistreated her, there was an opportunity to break the mold and create a loving submission. Bummer.

Beautifully written in my opinion.

Good story with an important message

Guys need to treat women with respect

As a guy I hate the word “slut”

Very Hot!

I gave you 5 stars for this one just because you are one of my favorites and I love your mother/ son incest stories. This one I think would have been better for me if Jeremy had shared the submissive role with his mother and she got to peg him since it was one of her most desired fantasies. Great story as it is anyways Keep them cumming Jasmine

Another Smoking hot story..🔥🔥🔥