All Comments on 'Mommy Teases Son's Nerd Party Ch. 01'

Good premise, but...I'm just not a fan of the extremely liberal adjective use, especially considering about 1/3 (at least) of those are the word 'mommy'...I found it distracting. Tone that down a little and flesh out the story a bit and you'll have a winner.

The plot I am loving, however it looks like it will have more chapters. This does not give an introdroduction to why she is teasing her son in the first place. And is also not putting much of a story line. Its like a POV.

You are doing good, keep it up, just change and add a couple of things.

Pity I can't find more adventures of Ms Hummer

5 Stars!

I wish there was a chapter 2 to this

All that mommy this & mommy that would get mommy fucked well before the friends came over. At least an attempt at realism should be made. 👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻

If I’m not mistaken there are adjectives besides the word wobbly and WTF? Where’s the rest of the story? That’s it?

Please continue this story I Love the teasers