All Comments on 'Mommy's Bar Baby Ch. 02'

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jenorma2012jenorma2012almost 7 years ago
not a bad ch

I though it was good, a little short but still a good read can't wait for the next ch

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
good but....

good but to short....not enough detail.....your first effort was better.....there are other terms of endearment besides baby...precious...angel...sweetone...mommies girl...little one...keep it up....:)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
a good start

pleas much much more can't wait for the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
anxious for next chapter

Nicely written. good projection,

liz33ndliz33ndover 6 years ago
short and sweet

needs to slow down and be longer

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
beautiful

I really loved it. Please write more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
More

Hope to see lots more of your submissions and soon. Perhaps a bit longer ones would be nice!

Mistress Carrie

stroudlestroudleover 6 years ago
more please

please write ch 3 soon.

this a hot story but I would like it too be longer.

carnt wait for next installment

pleazu1pleazu1over 6 years ago
Trying to wait patiently.... for your your next Hot Erotic Story to appear!

Both Stories 1 & 2 were Excellent and Very Erotic! The only problem is that it's been a long wait since the end of July. I don't care if they are short like these, or longer ones, but PLEASE write another Story ASAP. You definitely have Talent, and we are Grateful to you for sharing with us.

Merry Christmas & Happy 2018!

BoxcarbillBoxcarbillover 4 years ago
Oh yes

You should continue the story. It has great possibilities

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Love it

What a great story, i wish there was a continuation.

MrSmith27MrSmith278 months ago

Hopefully "Mommy" introduces Alicia to some BDSM, spanking and a vibrating strap-on. Looking forward to the next instalment.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Write more seriously

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Is this going to continue???

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Please continue This!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Where tf is the next part

AnonymousAnonymous6 days ago

Person probably died

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