by CavyConsultant
Interesting but minor errors. Minna Saari is a Finnish name not Lapp (Sami). The natives do not use word Lapp they are Sami people. To have mom and daughter is not strange there because men are often long time hearding reindeers. The moral often differs from southern one. Sauna is bastu in Sweden.
great story and loved the twin aspect and granddad at the very end. I sincerely hope I wont have to wait till summer 16 folr an even length for an even lengthier chapter. Also eng, morals be damned when he returns. just hoping (not attempting to influence the author/ ty/ bill
It was hot, interesting and weird. I liked it but curious if or how you will explain if she is his twin sister why was he adopted? ***
Great story! Loved all the twists and turns. Hope there will a second chapter covering the return visit :-) Would great if it was alittle longer too :-)
If a boy's penis is cold, it's good to know that his mommy always has a cosy comfy place to warm (and wet) it up. Guess where.
You used this line in another story. Why didn't you say that the temperature was 7 degrees?
BTW, 7 degrees isn't that cold, for a "northerner."
Now, -25 (25 degrees below zero), that's a whole 'nother thing. LOL
RacfGuy
(A northern boy stuck in the 'mid-south')
Hope you are going to write a follow up chapter? Like to know what happened in the summer
If temp was in celsius then 25 below zero is more impressive.
Not sure why it was illegal to search for birth parent, you never explained.
But a nice story, nicely written, just short.
very different.
he was socially inept and twice nearly lost his male genitalia. how could he cause so many near disasters to his genitalia? once by nearly freezing it off and then by getting to close to flames. clumsy? I did like the local medical solutions. lol
A little bizarre, but an intriguing beginning to an ongoing story. Hopefully a permanent move from the US is in the future. A mother and daughter sharing a lover is exciting, but how do the keep from being jealous?
Really great story. Too many stories on Literotica follow the same formula. This was delightfully different. Only drawback is the bald pussies. I don't get it. As everyone else, I want part two....please!
A guy freezes his dick before he can piss and a 20 year old virgin is fine with him pissing her mouth, then he bends over and burns his dick on hot iron but mom heals that with mouth and cunt, then mom sits virgin daughter on his dick.
Sounds beliveable, like Alice in Wonderland
Wow! Great, amazing story......but you know what...the mom and sister already know.
There are so many avenues you could pursue that would make both an interesting and entertaining read. I hope you plan to take it further on down the road of completion.
You`ve never been in a sauna right?
First, 30 minutes in a sauna is a hell of a time, probably it felt like that long. Next, to come near an saunaofen in a distance less than half a meter, you already feel like burning, At last, you ever burnt a fingertip? That isn`t cured with a mouthfull of water, that is at least handwarm. Rest of the story veeery nice!
There are a few things that are a bit too ridiculous: one, where his penis freezes and she takes his urine; then second, his cock touching the hot metal. That aside, the idea is very hot--that he had his mother and sister--and will return. It would be interesting though if they found out or somehow knew the whole time (or just figured it out).
I hope there will be a sequel. As for the negative comments, I would ignore them. Some of the great and cowardly critics of the stories on Literotica feel the need to make snide and negative comments, all the while hiding behind the name "Anonymous". I believe authors should be allowed some artistic license as they weave a story, much like every artist need not make a portrait be a photographic likeness. Looking forward to reading more of your work.
Well written...interesting way of handling this. Hope you give us at least another chapter when he returns in the summer!!!
No need for the cheesy accent.
Trashed what seemed like a decent story, couldn't read it all.
One of the BEST ! 5*****'s . That was one of the best short stories I have read in a long long time .Keep up the good work .
Thanks for the GREAT read .
tx cracker
An interesting story from a different perspective. Traveling to a foreign country to find his long lost mother, then getting to fuck her besides. Yumping yiminy!
Cool, refreshing, and intriguing story that was a complete blast! Thanks for posting.
Brilliant. And not far off with the swedish.
Scandinavian girls are not in the least slutty, in fact they are very particular about whom they choose to share their bed. But they are NOT puritan ...
This story could obviously do with an extended chapter 2. Lots of story to explore there...
Superb story i loved it enjoyed it and nic ending wish u can post a sequel to it
I've always wanted to visit the "old country". Especially if the women are like those two. More Chapters please.
Thank you for a very good read, I was wondering how he was going to explain who he was, you handled that perfectly.
"Mom's An Arctic Fox:" - A twenty-one year old American "Yankee" gets to fuck his long-lost birth mother and long-lost virgin twin sister in 'one fell swoop.' It doesn't get any better! The story lost some of its glorious glitter--for me--when the long-lost son stuck his dick in his mother's bodily waste hole.