All Comments on 'Moms & Lovers Ch. 05 Talia & Mary'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Story is great so far just hope it doesn't change into a free for all.

onelimpdickonelimpdickover 7 years ago
disapointed

Please tell me that there is a number 5. I fel like i was left out in the cold.

Foxterot7aFoxterot7aalmost 3 years ago

Thoroughly impressed with this story. I like the subplot development and the emotional growth of the main characters. My only disappointment with the characters is the attitude of Talia. She is overly vindictive toward her husband and daughter. It does not matter who's affair started first. Incest is incest whether between father/husband and daughter or wife/mother and son. Talia knows that if any case, criminal or domestic, everyone would lose.

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Thanks for your patience. Two Moms, A Tale is about to come to a conclusion. Concentrating on finalizing Two Moms and changing the next chapters to reflect a twist in plot line(s). Current family dynamics do not lend themselves to new twists. I'll close out Two Moms by withdra...